SUPER NORMAL DAY
"Too few ratings to be ranked"
played times (finished )
"walk in the park"
"A well spent lunch break"
"must be at least this tall to play"
Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 10. If this were a movie, it would probably be between G and PG.
nothing to see here you probably shouldn't even play
And I thought there was nothing worse than WC! Ha, I was wrong!
on 6/24/2015 9:08:20 AM
You're right! I wish I didn't play this!
on 6/22/2015 10:57:35 PM
By far the most entertaining part of this was the infinite loop of breakfasts I managed to trap myself in. The breakfasting shenanigans almost got this game rated 2/8, but the fact that the description itself says not to play the game breaks it. If you don't think anyone should play the game, WHY DID YOU PUBLISH IT?
As for critiquing, most people have already said it, but it's too short, contains too many non sequiturs, and leaves the reader with less information than when they started. The title is also completely misleading, unless this happens to the author on a daily basis, which (if my breakfast loop is any indication) is certainly an unsustainable habit at best. 1/8
on 6/22/2015 8:24:56 PM
The grammar was really bad; I'm thinking you heavily work on your capitilization and punctuation specifically.. There was a lot of 4th wall breaking and I didn't really care much for the humor. The story events seemed to be happening in a blink of an eye; you could really have put some build-up and take some time to describe where we were and what we were doing.
on 6/22/2015 12:56:36 AM
What's the point? Why would you create a story that's an absolute piece of trash? And to think, you actually encouraged us not to play. A true story needs a plot, a setting, some main characters, a point of view and a theme. I believe the only thing you rightly put in here was point of view.
Sometimes I ask myself why you people bother to write If you will just publish absolutely normal trash like this.
on 6/21/2015 10:03:11 PM
*sigh* Don't waste our time reading this and make a good one for god's sake!
on 6/21/2015 7:38:13 PM
This was great. I will definitely play again!
-- Dad on 6/21/2015 4:50:20 PM
Absolute trash. 1/8
on 6/21/2015 4:49:21 PM
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