Suzy's Strange Saga

Player Rating7.08/8

"#24 overall, #4 for 2015"
based on 270 ratings since 04/24/2015
played 13,676 times (finished 452)

Story Difficulty6/8

"wandering through the desert"

Play Length8/8

"Even light has to break at the rest stop"

Maturity Level7/8

"anything goes"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 18. If this were a movie, it would probably be R.

Things would be so much easier if your name was Mary Sue

Additional notes:

This story is a fully self contained one and can easily be read on its own, however it also acts as:

A direct sequel to the "Good Girl" short story in Tales From The Basement.

A semi sequel to the other TFTB short stories, Repression, TRASH, Love SICK and Geek.

A semi prequel to Ground Zero.

As with any of my writings, the story comes before the game. However while there isn't a complex inventory and all of that, you can still "win" by getting one of the epilogues.

There are 16 epilogues total.

Player Comments

Few people can take what would typically be considered over-the-top themes with the skill of EndMaster and splice them so harmoniously into a legitimate storyline.

Another fantastic story and the world is that much more blessed.
-- Bucky on 10/16/2015 11:10:54 PM with a score of 0
This was fucking epic. Epilogue 16 just left me feeling completely baffled - but I can't state why without revealing spoilers. I'm normally not really into these kind of 'wacky' stories but this was definitely an exception. I managed to spot a few grammatical errors but that ultimately didn't detract from the story. My only complaint is that in some instances, instead of organised paragraphs, I had to read through giant walls of text which wasn't really pleasant on the eyes - but again, that wasn't really a major issue. I also loved the references to many of your other stories and how smartly integrated they were.

I gave this a 7/8. Great work.
-- Xiro on 4/30/2015 8:48:25 AM with a score of 0
Ye have truly outdone yourself this time, My Friend! Without a doubt this is better than both Ground Zero & The Order of the Midnight Sun combined (that's saying quite a lot considering those are two of the best storygames on here as far as i'm concerned)!

To name a few of the good points (though there's far too many to name):

Descriptions & Background are very impressive & help the reader to relate to the characters & helps the reader fully feel like the they are the main character.

Storyline & Plot are greatly done & all while reading through, it became just like "a great book ye become captivated by & don't want to put down" & had me hungry for more with each page I read!

The Length was also very well done- not too long & progressed quickly enough to make it feel more like reality itself than just a story.

The ONLY bad point I saw (which is hilarious since it is so tiny):
Only one misspelled word in the entire storygame- ye spelled the word glorious as glourius (which most i'm sure either didn't catch or didn't worry about).

I rated it an 8 (I would rate higher if it were possible to do so).

Overall: Ye have a truly amazing & awe-inspiring storygame here that could easily become a legend! It is inconceivable how ye could ever make a storygame to be better than this one, if even just to rival its greatness! Keep up the incredible work, My Friend!
-- bearclaw01234 on 4/29/2015 3:16:18 PM with a score of 0
After a few days of trying I finally found all epilogues :) I really enjoyed the story! It was the perfect combination of weird and exciting! I also really enjoyed the authors way of writing but I can't point out what I liked about it exactly. I would mosy certainly recommend it to others! :)
-- Sieka :) on 1/1/2017 12:11:20 PM with a score of 0
Yet another brilliant story from EndMaster!

I love how i got an ironic ending.

Keep it up, End!
-- Himario on 10/19/2016 11:05:30 PM with a score of 0
I really like this story, I have played through all of those paths. from the looking for a job one, to the one with Bobby, and I can see that you put a lot of hard work in to this story. Not to mention of course, that the graphic parts were considerably mild from what I have seen in stories in the past, which is always somewhat welcome, at least partially.
-- Shinobi on 10/7/2016 1:56:14 PM with a score of 0
Now I have a sense of closure. I finally figured out what the Eternal's name is, although he's always going to be "The Eternal." Aside from that gem...
I must say Suzy's Strange Saga certainly entertained me. Yet another of Endmaster's masterpieces.
-- EbonVasilis on 9/12/2016 2:12:36 PM with a score of 0
Really, really good. The link back to Eternal was well worth it.
-- UnchainedBeast on 9/8/2016 7:34:52 PM with a score of 0
As good as Eternal. Makes me wanna read Ground Zero again!
-- boringtuna on 8/23/2016 3:30:56 AM with a score of 0
Took me a while but I finally read all the endings. Quiet a wild ride. as always great writing by Endmaster. My favorite 3 endings were Epilogue 16, 15, & 8.
-- BigRonn77 on 8/11/2016 4:14:23 PM with a score of 0
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