Suzy's Strange Saga

Player Rating7.06/8

"#26 overall, #2 for 2015"
based on 306 ratings since 04/24/2015
played 16,611 times (finished 503)

Story Difficulty8/8

"mosie through a minefield"

Play Length8/8

"Even light has to break at the rest stop"

Maturity Level7/8

"anything goes"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 18. If this were a movie, it would probably be R.

Things would be so much easier if your name was Mary Sue

Additional notes:

This story is a fully self contained one and can easily be read on its own, however it also acts as:

A direct sequel to the "Good Girl" short story in Tales From The Basement.

A semi sequel to the other TFTB short stories, Repression, TRASH, Love SICK and Geek.

A semi prequel to Ground Zero.

As with any of my writings, the story comes before the game. However while there isn't a complex inventory and all of that, you can still "win" by getting one of the epilogues.

There are 16 epilogues total.

Player Comments

Few people can take what would typically be considered over-the-top themes with the skill of EndMaster and splice them so harmoniously into a legitimate storyline.

Another fantastic story and the world is that much more blessed.
-- Bucky on 10/16/2015 11:10:54 PM with a score of 0
This was fucking epic. Epilogue 16 just left me feeling completely baffled - but I can't state why without revealing spoilers. I'm normally not really into these kind of 'wacky' stories but this was definitely an exception. I managed to spot a few grammatical errors but that ultimately didn't detract from the story. My only complaint is that in some instances, instead of organised paragraphs, I had to read through giant walls of text which wasn't really pleasant on the eyes - but again, that wasn't really a major issue. I also loved the references to many of your other stories and how smartly integrated they were.

I gave this a 7/8. Great work.
-- Xiro on 4/30/2015 8:48:25 AM with a score of 0
Ye have truly outdone yourself this time, My Friend! Without a doubt this is better than both Ground Zero & The Order of the Midnight Sun combined (that's saying quite a lot considering those are two of the best storygames on here as far as i'm concerned)!

To name a few of the good points (though there's far too many to name):

Descriptions & Background are very impressive & help the reader to relate to the characters & helps the reader fully feel like the they are the main character.

Storyline & Plot are greatly done & all while reading through, it became just like "a great book ye become captivated by & don't want to put down" & had me hungry for more with each page I read!

The Length was also very well done- not too long & progressed quickly enough to make it feel more like reality itself than just a story.

The ONLY bad point I saw (which is hilarious since it is so tiny):
Only one misspelled word in the entire storygame- ye spelled the word glorious as glourius (which most i'm sure either didn't catch or didn't worry about).

I rated it an 8 (I would rate higher if it were possible to do so).

Overall: Ye have a truly amazing & awe-inspiring storygame here that could easily become a legend! It is inconceivable how ye could ever make a storygame to be better than this one, if even just to rival its greatness! Keep up the incredible work, My Friend!
-- bearclaw01234 on 4/29/2015 3:16:18 PM with a score of 0
I fell like this story has given a lot more background on characters from the rest of your stories. Like the Love SICK brother(revealed as Leslie) and sister(Lillith) and Mel and Tina from Trash. Great story Endmaster, can't wait for your next one.
-- qawsed123 on 7/9/2017 11:29:07 AM with a score of 0
I have gotten all of the endings! My fav was the one including Anu, and the one where you have chiddlers with Roger. Those two endings contained a fair amount of porn which was a bit disgusting... But it was interesting to read.
-- them love expert on 5/30/2017 9:27:24 PM with a score of 0
It actually tied in another story without seeming forced. If I hadn't played Eternal I'd still be impressed. Good job
-- ShortcutButton on 4/23/2017 12:17:04 AM with a score of 0
Hey, that's pretty good.
-- Comic1302 on 4/4/2017 11:41:00 PM with a score of 0
Well I'll tell you one thing, I'm certainly not taking any life advice away from this. But it was certainly well constructed. And a lot of effort went into it.

My real issue is just that being a Satanist slut kind of detracted from the enjoyability of the story. Besides that my love interest is an idiot, and I'm a somewhat shallow character. Everyone is also an asshole... so there's that.

Still, I have a tendency to point out the flaws in a story without pointing out its strengths. And it was certainly not weak in any aspect. It's just not my cup of tea.

I'm giving this one a 6.
-- apsoy on 3/8/2017 4:14:52 AM with a score of 0
That was an awesome story i have 2 epilogues and i plan to find them all, but no mater which part i take i'm thrown for an exciting loop, i would defiantly recommend this to an fan of EndMaster's work or even a new reader though it is recommended to have read some of his other works to find the cameos 8-p, but really it is one of my favorite stories i have read including published novels.
-- SaitenX on 3/7/2017 6:02:19 AM with a score of 0

I came to this one after playing Eternal as I saw you could discover the Eternal's true name from playing it, and I got the ending and I had this weird laugh and being full of nostalgia and this just seems like the best ending because everything is connected and GOSHHHHHH

You are the best writer ever. Thank you for the continued entertainment.

I also love the replay value because my meta knowledge gives me this powerful sense of how connected everything is, butterfly effect to the extreme, but also how much more there is in life that's just not understood, how much we have to learn about ourselves and each other... and I'm rambling and not really getting the point across like I'd hoped to.

But really, amazing stuff.
-- dovahquinoa on 3/6/2017 4:54:22 PM with a score of 0
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