Suzy's Strange Saga

Player Rating7.05/8

"#23 overall, #2 for 2015"
based on 335 ratings since 04/24/2015
played 18,621 times (finished 543)

Story Difficulty8/8

"mosie through a minefield"

Play Length8/8

"Even light has to break at the rest stop"

Maturity Level7/8

"anything goes"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 18. If this were a movie, it would probably be R.

Things would be so much easier if your name was Mary Sue

Additional notes:

This story is a fully self contained one and can easily be read on its own, however it also acts as:

A direct sequel to the "Good Girl" short story in Tales From The Basement.

A semi sequel to the other TFTB short stories, Repression, TRASH, Love SICK and Geek.

A semi prequel to Ground Zero.

As with any of my writings, the story comes before the game. However while there isn't a complex inventory and all of that, you can still "win" by getting one of the epilogues.

There are 16 epilogues total.

Player Comments

Few people can take what would typically be considered over-the-top themes with the skill of EndMaster and splice them so harmoniously into a legitimate storyline.

Another fantastic story and the world is that much more blessed.
-- Bucky on 10/16/2015 11:10:54 PM with a score of 0
This was fucking epic. Epilogue 16 just left me feeling completely baffled - but I can't state why without revealing spoilers. I'm normally not really into these kind of 'wacky' stories but this was definitely an exception. I managed to spot a few grammatical errors but that ultimately didn't detract from the story. My only complaint is that in some instances, instead of organised paragraphs, I had to read through giant walls of text which wasn't really pleasant on the eyes - but again, that wasn't really a major issue. I also loved the references to many of your other stories and how smartly integrated they were.

I gave this a 7/8. Great work.
-- Xiro on 4/30/2015 8:48:25 AM with a score of 0
Ye have truly outdone yourself this time, My Friend! Without a doubt this is better than both Ground Zero & The Order of the Midnight Sun combined (that's saying quite a lot considering those are two of the best storygames on here as far as i'm concerned)!

To name a few of the good points (though there's far too many to name):

Descriptions & Background are very impressive & help the reader to relate to the characters & helps the reader fully feel like the they are the main character.

Storyline & Plot are greatly done & all while reading through, it became just like "a great book ye become captivated by & don't want to put down" & had me hungry for more with each page I read!

The Length was also very well done- not too long & progressed quickly enough to make it feel more like reality itself than just a story.

The ONLY bad point I saw (which is hilarious since it is so tiny):
Only one misspelled word in the entire storygame- ye spelled the word glorious as glourius (which most i'm sure either didn't catch or didn't worry about).

I rated it an 8 (I would rate higher if it were possible to do so).

Overall: Ye have a truly amazing & awe-inspiring storygame here that could easily become a legend! It is inconceivable how ye could ever make a storygame to be better than this one, if even just to rival its greatness! Keep up the incredible work, My Friend!
-- bearclaw01234 on 4/29/2015 3:16:18 PM with a score of 0
Really enjoayble story, good work man!
-- Neupyo on 11/20/2017 5:32:56 AM with a score of 0
Just read the following taken straight from the story and imagine the rest...
(warning strong graphic language)

I’m…sorry Suzy…I just thought…I dunno…you liked me…” Helen says looking down.
“I do like you, but…wait, so you don’t love Bobby anymore?” you ask.
“I do…but I feel like we’ve been so close these past two days, I think I’m starting to fall for you too. I mean when our lips were touching I felt a closer connection to you than I ever had before.”
“You were giving me mouth to mouth resuscitation!” you shout.
“But you embraced me in your arms! You even slipped your tongue in my mouth and when you opened your eyes you didn’t even let go immediately…” Helen points out.
“I…I… was out of it! I thought you were Bobby!” you exclaim.
“Bobby kisses like me?” Helen asks.
“No, you tasted sweeter…I mean…fuck…Gah! Look I thought you were Bobby okay?”
“Okay…I’m sorry Suzy. I didn’t mean to offend you.”
“I’m not offended, this is just…weird though. I’m not a lesbian, not to mention I’m going to marry your brother. (Sigh) Look Helen, I’m a little tired to deal with this right now. I think we might have to address this in more detail tomorrow.”
“But the wedding is tomorrow.”
“Well, I guess that will be one more thing to deal with then, so until then good night. And before you even ask, no I won’t tell Bobby about this. I’m sure he’s got enough on his mind.” You say.
“Thank you Suzy.” Helen says and then slowly walks out of your room.

Got the ending: Epilogue 12: Parent of Sanity
Parent of Sanity

“I don’t want YOU to ever be that unprepared. Hence why you have to occasionally deal with the outside world no matter how shitty it is. Had I actually been prepared, maybe I could’ve made some better choices. Don’t get me wrong, I think I made the best of a potentially bad situation and I’m happy with your father, and my current life could be a hell of a lot worse, but still sometimes I think: What if?”
“Doesn’t Tiamat teach us all that life is chaos and that ultimately our choices don’t really matter anyway?” Enki asks.
“Do you really believe in all that stuff?”
“Not really.”
“Which is another example of how you stand out from the rest. You’re intelligent and you’re a potential leader, Enki. You’re not like your siblings…or rather your half siblings. Helen can have as many incest babies as she likes, She can have them in the double digits to match their IQ levels and your father can use them in whatever war he likes. Your life however is much more valuable. You’re MY son and there is only one of you.”

Maybe you made some concessions to get where you are and you even had some fun doing it, but at least your son knows that he doesn’t have to compromise and can be a master of his own destiny rather than being a slave to circumstance.

Even Grandma Morningstar would approve of that lesson.
-- TestingJest on 11/7/2017 9:54:12 PM with a score of 0
YES! I finally got all of the endings. I loved this game so MUCH.
-- DiniTheWizard on 9/24/2017 12:36:17 AM with a score of 0
I fell like this story has given a lot more background on characters from the rest of your stories. Like the Love SICK brother(revealed as Leslie) and sister(Lillith) and Mel and Tina from Trash. Great story Endmaster, can't wait for your next one.
-- qawsed123 on 7/9/2017 11:29:07 AM with a score of 0
I have gotten all of the endings! My fav was the one including Anu, and the one where you have chiddlers with Roger. Those two endings contained a fair amount of porn which was a bit disgusting... But it was interesting to read.
-- them love expert on 5/30/2017 9:27:24 PM with a score of 0
It actually tied in another story without seeming forced. If I hadn't played Eternal I'd still be impressed. Good job
-- ShortcutButton on 4/23/2017 12:17:04 AM with a score of 0
Hey, that's pretty good.
-- Comic1302 on 4/4/2017 11:41:00 PM with a score of 0
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