The Bard's Tale

Player Rating6.33/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"
based on 64 ratings since 12/15/2016
played 685 times (finished 79)

Story Difficulty3/8

"trek through the forest"

Play Length5/8

"Not going to lose any sleep"

Maturity Level4/8

"need to be accompanied by an adult"
Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG.

What could be better than a night at the inn, tankard in hand, listening to a bard tell tales of faraway lands and great heroes? His story has it all- brilliant wizards, beastly monsters, and buxom lasses always ready for a smile and a good time. Alright, so I made up the lasses, but the rest is true. 

Player Comments

Mmmm very good! :D As what the others said, sensible and great rhymes, awesome story, and beautiful imagery (I mean, if you count spit flying out of mouths beautiful... It's the imagery!)

The only thing I have to say is that the rhymes and sentences weren't in sync, so where the stanzas would end, the sentence (thought) didn't - you changed rhyme scenes in the middle of a sentence. I know it's really hard to do that, and I see the work you put into this!

This is one of the more classical ballads, and it's one of the better ballads I've ever read. :D
-- Crescentstar on 12/16/2016 2:28:52 PM with a score of 0
The writing in this was pretty remarkable, and the pictures were a added bonus that certainly enhanced the reading experience.

Oh, and it had rhymes :) The effort and detail that was placed into this ballad was very impressive. I really found myself being drawn in by the imagery and writing.

Bravo on creating a very amazing ballad, pugpup! ^_^
-- TharaApples on 12/16/2016 12:38:47 AM with a score of 0
I can't remember the last time I gave out an 8. Maybe I never have? But holy crap, this was fantastic. The framing story and the ballads meshed perfectly, and every path worked as an engaging story and ploy in its own right.

VERY well done, I'm seriously impressed. You should've bet more points, because you've got this contest in the bag.
-- mizal on 12/15/2016 11:44:41 PM with a score of 0
I thoroughly enjoyed the Bard's Tale. Wish it could be longer just so I could enjoy it more.
-- VRoman on 2/12/2017 5:35:28 PM with a score of 0
Very nicely done, sir. I quite enjoyed it.
-- EZunmaker on 1/23/2017 10:42:17 PM with a score of 0
Very true: once a criminal always a criminal.
-- The Ghost on 1/5/2017 3:50:59 AM with a score of 0
Great. I loved this!
-- Mage on 12/22/2016 2:28:41 PM with a score of 0
Well done.
-- Ford on 12/16/2016 6:59:15 AM with a score of 0
Great use of pictures to compliment the already good writing.

Definitely need to go through all the paths on this one. Nice job all the way around.
-- EndMaster on 12/16/2016 12:19:11 AM with a score of 0
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