The Firebird

I felt that when I made the right choices, the author forced me to do the wrong thing (like the cage, for example). It defeats the whole point of playing. It was a good idea, but the writer should have developed it further and not been so manipulative.

Very nice!
I'm a sucker for Slavic folktales, I'll say that much--and while I would have liked a few more nods to the stylistic details of Russian fairytales, it's still very nice to see them represented here. And you did a good job of it, so all's well!

VERY WELL DONE. yes it requires you to follow the path of the story, but I felt like I was in control of the outcome from the beginning non-the-less. Well put together, perfect for edutainment category. Congrats!

Very good! I actually have a book that is a collection of shortstories, and this one is really similar to a story in the book. In that, it's a fox that helps the prince, and he has to get the golden bird, golden horse, and the princess. The fox turns out to be the princess's brother, who was enchanted by a witch.

hmm. meh

I love all the adventures. :)

Doesn't sound very much like the original folktale, and the ending was confusing (I sided with the wolf on the white horse argument). It would have been a great adaptation of the story though.

i loved the fire bird as a child and sadly this was a disgrace to the folktale. I'm disapointed and hope you will make a better version

Very interesting story. It's detailed, and gives you lots of choices.

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