The Free Hand

Player Rating7/8

"even better than Reeses' Cups®"
based on 260 ratings since 02/14/2006
played 10,131 times (finished 266)

Story Difficulty4/8

"march in the swamp"

Play Length5/8

"Not going to lose any sleep"

Maturity Level6/8

"i'll need to see some identification"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 16. If this were a movie, it would probably between PG-13 and R.

He shivered. [Mystery, horror]

The Free Hand 

A work of Fiction by Ashen_Snake.

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Player Comments

Eerie. Quite well-written, and requires thought but doesn't feel frustrating in trying to beat. I managed to get (all?) three endings after a few tries. Nice work.
-- Trzcina on 1/5/2010 8:50:35 PM with a score of 0
If you're thirteen years old, then you are the most precocious writer I've ever seen. Regardless, not only is this one of the best written stories on the site, it is one of the best stories, and combines the intense descriptions disturbing photos. Excellent everything! This is going in my list.
-- madglee on 9/12/2006 8:56:04 PM with a score of 0
ending 2 and 3 arent that different. but otherwise. great job on the symbolism and allusions. its a bit short. but the quality of the plot is great
-- Sean on 6/2/2013 2:30:50 PM with a score of 0
ending 2 and 3 arent that different. but otherwise. great job on the symbolism and allusions. its a bit short. but the quality of the plot is great
-- Sean on 6/2/2013 2:12:04 PM with a score of 0
This game is amazingly done. The writing is fantastic, despite a handful of spelling errors near the beginning. 8/8
-- KnightingaleSiren on 5/23/2013 12:56:55 PM with a score of 0
kinda short, but fun.
-- epiclab on 5/22/2013 4:30:07 PM with a score of 0
Well, it wasn't the creepiest of things. (much of what I read was gore for the sake of gore, some vague symbolism, and not much character development. Not to mention the silent hill tumor at the end of the first hallway, and clocks that I see no real purpose for.) But it wasn't the worst, and I guess it isn't creepy only when you over-think it, which I often do. But you did nicely otherwise, and you made an advanced storygame, and for that I respect your abilities. The combat was (surprisingly) satisfying, and it was touching in a weird way when it was revealed that Nathan was [SPOILERS].
-- ISentinelPenguinI on 4/19/2013 5:36:08 PM with a score of 0
It was really AWESOME!!!!
-- Chaze on 4/13/2013 1:19:37 PM with a score of 0
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I would've liked to be able to kill the big bubbly thing in the hallway outside the starting room. Other than that, this was brilliant!
-- strange man on 1/28/2013 6:57:30 PM with a score of 0
Great Writing and item use.
-- Xt1000305 on 1/28/2013 6:03:31 AM with a score of 0
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