The Lost Island

Player Rating3.95/8

"#446 overall, #47 for 2013"
based on 128 ratings since 02/25/2013
played 889 times (finished 128)

Story Difficulty3/8

"trek through the forest"

Play Length2/8

"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"

Maturity Level4/8

"need to be accompanied by an adult"
Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG.

Tags

This game is about a lost castaway that must survive through tough terrain, deadly animals, and other life threatening situations. Come along on this journey and see if you can make it out alive!

Player Comments

A fairly enjoyable storygame :)

The writing in this was decent enough, although I noticed that it was a bit linear. Also, some of the dialogue switched from third person to first, and that didn't really do much for the sense of immersion as I read. This game was rather short but I do appreciate that effort that's here, as I didn't find myself finding anything too glaringly obvious as far as any potential problems go. So good job on proofreading and overall care to your game.

One aspect that also made this storygame better in the long run were the pictures. They added life to the writing and fit together nicely with the overall plot, never feeling out of place as to what was happening in the story.

Still, this was rather short for a storygame that's about survival on a island. There was some challenge here, but the overall challenge doesn't last long when this game's length is taken into account. Although this isn't a game with the most depth, it's still one with some rather decent writing in it.

At the end of the day I enjoyed this, so great work.
-- TharaApples on 3/18/2017 12:13:22 AM with a score of 0
You are a decent writer. You have clearly point some effort into making a good story.

The story is short and has loads of scope for more depth, but you know how to construct prose better than a lot of the authors on this site.
-- Jordi P on 4/5/2018 11:35:56 AM with a score of 0
Ok
-- DetroitShani313 on 1/2/2018 3:59:06 AM with a score of 0
This was quite fun! A bit simple but enjoyable if you want a quick storygame.
-- Saika on 3/10/2017 4:46:38 PM with a score of 0
its awesome but maybe a little bit longer
-- Masterodemolition on 2/15/2017 3:12:58 PM with a score of 0
Good, but maybe if it was a bit longer...
-- ZombieGamer9188 on 2/14/2017 7:58:22 PM with a score of 0
5/8 Not a bad story. It was very short for at least my choices. I didn't pick anything bad so not sure if there are bad consequences or not. It entertained me, so not bad!
-- JinDary on 2/12/2016 2:14:09 PM with a score of 0
Not bad at all.
-- Penworth on 6/12/2015 11:46:42 AM with a score of 0
Well I got eaten by a pack of hyenas, so I don't really know that much about what happens. :P
-- Creature on 4/10/2015 7:48:28 AM with a score of 0
This was really fun!
-- Firestar on 10/4/2014 1:51:18 PM with a score of 0
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