The Party Awaits!

Player Rating2.96/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"
based on 11 ratings since 10/04/2018
played 59 times (finished 14)

Story Difficulty2/8

"walk in the park"

Play Length3/8

"A nice jog down the driveway"

Maturity Level3/8

"must be at least this tall to play"
Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 10. If this were a movie, it would probably be between G and PG.

Tags

party.jpgJake, knew his night was about to get more interesting the moment that his cellphone began to ring. His best friend Steve let it slip earlier in the day that he knew about a party happening at a nearby house, and it was time to sneak out!

 

 

 

 

Player Comments

I imagine this was written as a minigame to try the system out, and there aren't any evident mistakes in the grammar and style departments. I would use the standard font for the main text though, this one is less readable and would annoy me if the story was longer. I'm sure you know that you'll have to put in much more effort to create a well-developed storygame.
-- undr on 10/6/2018 6:32:23 PM with a score of 0
Sure, this was short and has only one ending but I like it. Not gonna leave a rating though
-- WritingStories on 10/6/2018 12:32:43 PM with a score of 0
Not bad for a first story, but there's room to grow here. The whole point of this story format is to have more than one ending, and I only found one. On the plus side, the items worked and I only found one spelling error.
-- ultraoverlord on 10/5/2018 8:26:58 PM with a score of 0
This was a nice trial run of the editor. Make efforts to increase the number of possible outcomes other than premature failures. "Linear" CYS are frowned upon. You might be able to produce quality content one day soon.
-- ugilick on 10/5/2018 1:08:22 PM with a score of 0
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