The Road to Glasgow.
, #23 for
played 1,706 times (finished 200)
"run through the jungle"
"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"
"aren't you a little too old to be trick or treating"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG-13.
It's like an escape. From a creepy town.
This was pretty good! There are enough twists to keep the reader interested, while also having a good balance of humor and spooky elements to be a quite a enjoyable read. I also came across no issues with grammar, or at least ones that are readily apparent.
So, in closing, I feel as if this is a decent story.
on 10/3/2016 1:09:05 AM with a score of 0
very fun and entertaining all the way through. And I prefer stories like this where there isn't a ton of paragraphs to read through before making your decision. Great job on this one!
on 6/27/2015 5:18:20 AM with a score of 0
Good quality writing, but the story could use some polish.
Would be a nice addition to the new horror category.
on 12/4/2007 7:28:03 PM with a score of 0
Severely limits your choices.
on 7/13/2019 11:16:42 AM with a score of 0
Taking advantage of the advance editor helped out with making this have a more proper text adventure feel. Been a mem since 2007, but you have only wrote two story games, how unfortunate.
on 9/24/2018 2:26:30 PM with a score of 0
This was one of the best, most hilarious story games I've played! Amazing job! Keep writing!
on 1/10/2018 12:41:08 PM with a score of 0
I liked it it was a pretty good story
on 10/30/2017 5:24:27 PM with a score of 0
It was oddly humorous for such a simple and short story... and oddly random. If there was one thing I would've like to see more were longer pages with more descriptions and possibly, much more fun lines, but oh well!
In short, I found it an ok story with a oddly appealing sense of humor, I rate it a 4/8.
Good luck on your next storygame.
on 11/24/2016 2:58:46 AM with a score of 0
random and kinda confusing at first, but not too random and confusing to lose interest. 5/8
on 6/19/2016 9:42:02 AM with a score of 0
The first few times I was confused until I realized i needed to tap the items (you should tell people to do that in the discription)
Anyway it is a decent game, I won't play it again and again.
-- Reader on 5/10/2016 7:11:59 PM with a score of 0
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