The Very Best
, #77 for
played 1,232 times (finished 118)
"walk in the park"
"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"
"appropriate for all ages"
Stories with this maturity level will not, by design, have any potentially objectionable content. An example of a type story with this rating would be a quiz on mathematics.
Pick your pokemon, go on an adventure, and get to the next town!
Your grammar is on point and it at least had long paragraphs, although, the downfall of this story is that it was too short and it didn't really hold my interest. The endings were also kind of anti-climatic.
At the base of this though, seems like it if you added more plot, maybe who we are, or a more detailed, thorough plot. I don't know. A good start, maybe, but I think you could do a little better :)
on 5/18/2016 3:51:16 PM with a score of 0
I liked Pokemon as much as the next guy, and I love the fact that you actually incorporated an actual battle into the game, but the game could have been a lot better of you'd make it an advanced game. (You'd be able to have more attacks, different amounts of damage dealt, etc..) The story was pretty short as well, but the writing was done nicely.
on 1/12/2015 8:56:43 AM with a score of 0
It seems well-written but very short. I liked that when I was battling the wild pokemon I could choose to catch it or finish it like in the games, but I wish there had been more choices for the battle (eg the ability to choose which moves to use against the enemy pokemon). Overall a nice little game that really reminded me of the start of a pokemon game, but it would be more interesting if it were expanded on.
on 6/5/2018 4:06:24 AM with a score of 0
-- Jesus on 5/30/2018 4:41:30 AM with a score of 0
It was probably only so short because I chose the path of least resistance, but I had hoped for a bit more of a story. I liked the pictures and writing style, but over too quickly!
on 5/22/2018 10:24:29 PM with a score of 0
Eh. This was short and boring.
on 12/31/2016 1:46:30 PM with a score of 0
short but cute... couldve been better
on 7/2/2016 2:47:02 PM with a score of 0
on 5/3/2016 3:31:00 PM with a score of 0
on 11/12/2015 6:03:16 PM with a score of 0
At least I won... Even with the magikarp...
on 6/30/2015 3:16:36 AM with a score of 0
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