The Very Best
a
Fan Fiction
by
ohaiitsrachel
Player Rating
3.38/8
"#656
overall
, #70 for
2014
"
based on
127 ratings
since 04/14/2014
played 1,348 times (finished 129)
Story Difficulty
2/8
"walk in the park"
Play Length
2/8
"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"
Maturity Level
1/8
"appropriate for all ages"
Stories with this maturity level will not, by design, have any potentially objectionable content. An example of a type story with this rating would be a quiz on mathematics.
Tags
Humor
Pick your pokemon, go on an adventure, and get to the next town!
Player Comments
The following comment contains spoilers. Be warned.
I did like the idea of a Pokemon game. The way you created it without the usage of variables and scripting did take away much of the charm of it though.
The battles were quite simple and the fact you had no chance of winning a fight against a weedle was kind of a hit to the gut for a fan of the pokemon games (at least till gen 5).
By using the advanced editor to create the battles or even making random encounters and a proper menu for your team and maybe even a pokedex would have been quite amazing. I guess you never bothered to get into the website that much and seeing your last activity was in 2014 means you probably also will not do that again.
Anyways. The game itself was pretty solid. I noticed no real grammar issues and the pictures added a nice flair to it.
It was enjoyable even though it was short.
--
LJacko
on 5/11/2020 4:12:39 AM with a score of 0
It seems well-written but very short. I liked that when I was battling the wild pokemon I could choose to catch it or finish it like in the games, but I wish there had been more choices for the battle (eg the ability to choose which moves to use against the enemy pokemon). Overall a nice little game that really reminded me of the start of a pokemon game, but it would be more interesting if it were expanded on.
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Bethius
on 6/5/2018 4:06:24 AM with a score of 0
Meh
-- Jesus on 5/30/2018 4:41:30 AM with a score of 0
It was probably only so short because I chose the path of least resistance, but I had hoped for a bit more of a story. I liked the pictures and writing style, but over too quickly!
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Anactaka
on 5/22/2018 10:24:29 PM with a score of 0
Eh. This was short and boring.
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Sierramist
on 12/31/2016 1:46:30 PM with a score of 0
short but cute... couldve been better
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thebigE
on 7/2/2016 2:47:02 PM with a score of 0
Your grammar is on point and it at least had long paragraphs, although, the downfall of this story is that it was too short and it didn't really hold my interest. The endings were also kind of anti-climatic.
At the base of this though, seems like it if you added more plot, maybe who we are, or a more detailed, thorough plot. I don't know. A good start, maybe, but I think you could do a little better :)
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Shadowulf
on 5/18/2016 3:51:16 PM with a score of 0
Good?
--
Jayheart4Ever
on 5/3/2016 3:31:00 PM with a score of 0
Magicarp, NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!
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QlhAah123
on 11/12/2015 6:03:16 PM with a score of 0
At least I won... Even with the magikarp...
--
Rosetail
on 6/30/2015 3:16:36 AM with a score of 0
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