Through The Dragon Lair

Player Rating3.48/8

"#581 overall, #58 for 2016"
based on 56 ratings since 09/16/2016
played 455 times (finished 67)

Story Difficulty4/8

"march in the swamp"

Play Length3/8

"A nice jog down the driveway"

Maturity Level3/8

"must be at least this tall to play"
Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 10. If this were a movie, it would probably be between G and PG.

This is a story about a a person who is to curious for her beige wearing robotic society. Their leaders accidentally tell the child that their is tell of dragon fire, so will you defeat the dragon or let your robotic society perish under the dragons breath. Wdownload.jpeghat will you decide?

Player Comments

How "How to Train Your Dragon" should have started.

Also, Red-Pink fire? You could call it Amaranth if you wanted to sound a little more fantasy realm like.

The story was too short. There were some spelling and grammar errors. Would have liked some more explanation as to what motivates the main character. Some things didn't make sense like first off he sneaks out of the house to go off on his own to try and save his community then ends up the community is glad they chose him to be the one to save them? was that a dig on how politicians sometimes take the credit for themselves?
All in all I enjoyed it, just wish there was more of it.
-- BigRonn77 on 11/2/2016 2:09:40 PM with a score of 0
Yeah, um. This is the best of that random group of awful storygames I heard about right? This is actually decent. Though short, the story at least had some sort of basic plot structure, paragraph structure, and acceptable grammar. The idea is pretty cliche, but a lot of things are when it comes to supposedly younger writers.

I'm not sure about this, but is this the only storygame out of the mass publications that had pictures? My comment is good job on bothering to find out how to get the pictures.

Write more, develop the plot, and tweak some grammar/structure here and there and you'll get a great piece.
-- Crescentstar on 9/16/2016 9:15:52 PM with a score of 0
There are some issues here with grammar and the like, but you have a great imagination and should be proud of being better than all your peers. I hope you keep writing and practicing.

You should also tell your teacher that she's retarded for opening your classmates up to potentially receive some brutal savagings. If she had looked around a little or even asked on the forum it should have been obvious none of those stories meet minimum site standards and that this isn't a community that's going to be agreeable to being flooded with low effort work from children that, however old you all are, should really have a better grasp of the basics of the English language by now.
-- mizal on 9/16/2016 3:56:59 PM with a score of 0
ho
-- Skitikmahah on 12/11/2018 11:07:00 AM with a score of 0
why is it so short
-- Daniel White on 11/10/2016 9:52:22 PM with a score of 0
*grammatical
c:
-- Seto on 9/19/2016 11:54:46 AM with a score of 0
Lots of gramitical errors, not very good in my opinion, sorry
-- JerryIsEpicLi on 9/18/2016 2:30:36 PM with a score of 0
Crescent, actually, most of the other stories had pictures.

Also, congratulations Haugen. Your story was the only one to survive the purge.
May you lead your friends to enlightment.

I thought this was pretty okay, and I gave it a 4 ^-^

If you need someone to help you edit this, I'm always here.
-- Seto on 9/17/2016 8:55:14 AM with a score of 0
Go Columbine your school. You're the only one worth keeping around.
-- Malkalack on 9/16/2016 3:35:13 PM with a score of 0
You are superior to your classmates in every way, shape, and form.

Kill them all.
-- itsplayayo on 9/16/2016 3:28:25 PM with a score of 0
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