Unicorns and Coins (advanced practice)

Player Rating1.69/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"
based on 29 ratings since
played times (finished )

Story Difficulty2/8

"walk in the park"

Play Length1/8

"Make sure not to blink"

Maturity Level1/8

"appropriate for all ages"
Stories with this maturity level will not, by design, have any potentially objectionable content. An example of a type story with this rating would be a quiz on mathematics.

If this game is messed up, please tell me so in the comments. I'm just practicing using Advanced, so you can critique it.

Player Comments

Let me just start off by saying, my advanced editor game was SOOO much worse than this. Just a few tips for the advanced editor, you can attach pictures to the items. Also, you don't need to publish this. You can add a link to it in the forms, or people can find ways to access it from your points menu (although I'm not quite sure why anyone would do that... it's kinda stalker-creepy and takes a long time). Anyways, have fun playing around with your story games, and always keep improving! :3
-- imagine13 on 7/11/2015 12:41:33 AM with a score of 0
This is a good storygame, but it could use some work.
-- OakfangxLeopardheart on 7/9/2015 8:44:25 AM with a score of 0
You shouldn't publish test game. If you need someone to assist you, just ask someone.
-- Raven47 on 7/7/2015 9:45:34 PM with a score of 0
I found a glitch. I only had a silver coin and I was able to buy a red unicorn and win.
-- Bolt78625 on 7/7/2015 1:30:28 PM with a score of 0
A little too boring for me. . .
-- Penworth on 7/7/2015 8:11:27 AM with a score of 0
:\ Could be a lot longer.
-- GMB13carat on 7/6/2015 9:19:03 PM with a score of 0
I'm not sure if it quite worked rightly! In the case of an open adventure it's generally advisable to have one page that serves as a sort of hallway to the many other branches.

That's a simple way to start anyway. Glad your trying to learn! Keep that up and improve a little every time. Eventually you'll publish a winner.
-- ugilick on 7/6/2015 5:31:13 PM with a score of 0
Don't publish your test games; if you want someone to play it, post a link to it in the Writing Workshop.
-- Chris113022 on 7/6/2015 2:52:30 PM with a score of 0
It was okay for a advanced test and even better since you're new.
-- Anon on 7/6/2015 2:18:03 PM with a score of 0
This was a test game after all, so I guess it was going to achieve a low score. I think you could have done better and asked someone to test your own little game instead of publishing it. Eh, perhaps you looked that over, I don't know.

If you're new with advanced editors, ask other players to get into it. Me, I can't do this kind of stuff without tons of help. I'm not good with scripting, but this is sort of simple. Could be a little better.

I'm just hoping that people won't be rash about this and yell at you. I mean, you're just trying out the site, no? I have a feeling you and I will be just friends :)

Woah, that was so unlike me.

Anyways, I give this story a 1/8

Good try, Inkling!
-- At_Your_Throat on 7/6/2015 1:54:06 PM with a score of 0
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