veangance quest

Player Rating2.53/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"
based on 124 ratings since
played times (finished )

Story Difficulty3/8

"trek through the forest"

Play Length3/8

"A nice jog down the driveway"

Maturity Level4/8

"need to be accompanied by an adult"
Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG.

you are a silk merchant in the city of Asderat in the country of Sveinan. this country is at war with the country of Dharix. the people of Dharix have a new weapon, a horrifying undead superwarrior. the superwarrior attacks, and everyone you know is dead. pilfering a sword from the wreckage of a mysterious building, you set out for revenge.

Player Comments

The plot is interesting. The writing needs to be expanded upon. The grammar/spelling just spoiled the effect of the whole thing. If you cleaned up the grammar and formatting and added more details, this might be a lot better storygame.
-- Christian_Writer on 1/2/2014 9:48:37 PM with a score of 0
A strong first effort. Could be greatly improved with attention to spelling and punctuation, not to mention the fact that nearly every page says "This is a new page." I would have liked to hear more details -how the hero came into possession of the sword, why this fleshy creature lives only miles from normal towns, etc. Pretty good description of the "superwarrior," though he could have had a better title. Make another one and spend a bit more time.
-- madglee on 11/26/2006 11:22:07 AM with a score of 0
you guys need to work on your grammar what the hell
-- deadshot117 on 11/7/2016 5:36:01 PM with a score of 0
Quite dumb and short.
-- Kate on 5/21/2016 6:13:44 PM with a score of 0
This is a new page.
It was pretty interesting, I guess.
-- TheBossWriter on 3/15/2016 11:33:46 AM with a score of 0
Really needs some editing, decent idea, please work on it
-- IrishKingDaniel on 3/6/2016 9:41:27 PM with a score of 0
The "This is a new page" on every page was a nice touch.
-- Beardon87 on 2/15/2016 1:39:56 AM with a score of 0
It was okay. The randomness was extreme and I kept on getting killed for doing seemingly random things like staying at a nice hotel or not sleeping in a suspicious cottage. It's not bad but to frustrating for it's own good.
-- h2otwo on 9/5/2015 10:42:41 PM with a score of 0
-- Whitepatch on 7/22/2015 5:30:42 AM with a score of 0
Good story and well written. I'd like to see more detail about the lead characters background and motivations.
-- Jordi P on 10/13/2014 12:11:47 PM with a score of 0
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