Welcome to Pablo's!

Player Rating4.63/8

"#274 overall, #16 for 2005"
based on 166 ratings since 06/16/2005
played 2,286 times (finished 181)

Story Difficulty2/8

"walk in the park"

Play Length3/8

"A nice jog down the driveway"

Maturity Level3/8

"must be at least this tall to play"
Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 10. If this were a movie, it would probably be between G and PG.
As a recently hired server at Pablo's Fine Tex-Mex Cantina, you must survive your first few weeks of training and make enough dough to pay the bills.

Player Comments

Very overrated.

The length in terms of branching was fine, but the amount of words on each page wasn't. There was little detail describing things, leaving a vague feeling in the storygame itself. The branching was also a bit awkward at times since few of the end pages actually had end links, and not just a link to the first page.

I suppose it's a rather ok way to kill a few minutes, but it's hard to really enjoy it since the characters have little development and the linearity is really annoying.

I'll admit, I did chuckle from time to time, but probably not as much as you intended the reader to.

Grammar wasn't exactly your main focus while creating this, I see. I noticed multiple errors, which is a bit disappointing since it's pretty short. Short stories should be easy to proofread.

It's a lot better then many storygames on the site, but I don't understand how this almost has a 5/8. I'll give you a 3/8.
-- MinnieKing on 5/20/2017 10:31:16 PM with a score of 0
It is very realistic
-- 149283 on 3/13/2018 11:09:18 AM with a score of 0
It was a pretty good read. It wasn't my type of humor, personally.
-- NapNeutrality on 12/23/2017 1:51:13 PM with a score of 0
My good deed paid off!
-- Chickdove on 5/14/2017 10:26:57 PM with a score of 0
Very overrated.

The length in terms of branching was fine, but the amount of words on each page wasn't. There was little detail describing things, leaving a vague feeling in the storygame itself.

I suppose it's a rather ok way to kill a few minutes, but it's hard to really enjoy it since the characters have little development and the linearity is really annoying.

I'll admit, I did chuckle from time to time, but probably not as much as you intended the reader to.

It's a lot better then many storygames on the site, but I don't understand how this almost has a 5/8.
-- MinnieKing on 5/12/2017 4:44:03 PM with a score of 0
It's really fun it gives a great picture of what it will be like if you work at a restaurant
-- keno351 on 12/19/2016 6:45:42 PM with a score of 0
meh its okay
-- ben on 9/29/2016 1:41:12 PM with a score of 0
Felt like it was a poor rip off of inkeeper.
-- Jimmysutton on 4/6/2016 3:22:39 PM with a score of 0
Not too bad... It could be a little bit longer though, and with items and an inventory or something. That would make it a lot better and you would get better reviews.
-- Flowerlynx on 4/1/2016 6:41:07 PM with a score of 0
Loads of fun
-- Dmanxbox on 5/15/2015 1:11:38 PM with a score of 0
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