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Player Rating4/8

"slightly more fun than homework"
based on 26 ratings since 01/19/2009
played 190 times (finished 29)

Story Difficulty2/8

"walk in the park"

Play Length3/8

"A nice jog down the driveway"

Maturity Level3/8

"must be at least this tall to play"
Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 10. If this were a movie, it would probably be between G and PG.

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You are Charles Wilmington, improvished and blackmailed scientist. You must now go to Siberia and witness the horror of horrors...

Transformed from a short story I wrote.

Player Comments

The story had grammatical errors and the story was too short.
-- Gilda on 4/5/2013 8:04:37 AM
Well the story wasn't bad but I was confused by the bit that said "there were people (at least I pray they were people) burnt down to skeletons." ... Well that's not very nice is it? :p
-- Briar_Rose on 11/18/2012 3:44:22 PM
Seth says HELL NO!!!!!!!! Short, boring, and in the beginning you were forced to make certain choices or the game was over. A horrible story all around. I gave you an extra point for no reason. 2/8
-- SethIsBeast on 11/4/2012 2:10:21 PM
kinda confusing
-- betaband on 5/10/2012 6:26:51 PM
Nice setting
-- BerkaZerka on 12/27/2011 11:04:47 PM
NIce story. 5/8
-- Killer999 on 11/2/2011 1:03:32 PM
Good story, but too linear. Either you choose one way or die (or go to jail)
-- fergie14233 on 3/3/2011 10:09:35 PM
Great story, but if you want to make a storygame out of it, you would need several stories that link.
-- Vitamins_n_Stds on 1/20/2009 9:49:48 PM
It's an excellent story, but it should remain a short story. I suppose this is how you share a short story with a CYOA site, but there's a reason we're a CYOA site.
-- Anubis on 1/19/2009 10:06:28 PM
Alright, watch the spelling and grammar. This was poor for a CYOA, you can actually see where you copy and pasted the story and just added on death endings and stubs at intervals. Really lazy. You should have written something new instead of simply copy and pasted and mutilated a short story. Still the writing was ok.
-- JJJ-thebanisher on 1/19/2009 9:49:56 PM
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