"Too few ratings to be ranked"
played times (finished )
"walk in the park"
"Make sure not to blink"
"need to be accompanied by an adult"
Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG.
you hunt zombies and make ailies and enimies
Whoever this is has like 50 alts and a bunch more crap like this primed and loaded. Brave yourselves for the flood, folks.
on 9/7/2016 5:21:57 PM with a score of 0
Ooh, a point!
on 9/7/2016 3:32:29 PM with a score of 0
on 9/7/2016 2:35:26 PM with a score of 0
I think you should decrease your difficulty rating. It...really isn't that difficult...especially since it's playlength is 1/8.
Also..more description. You can't just tell someone they died. "oh no you died" is not good enough.
You need to work on your grammar as well. The first level in every sentence is supposed to be capitalized. At least do that. Please.
Really, you should take this down, get a more original story idea, have editors, and maybe spend more than a few minutes making a storygame.
Sadly, I doubt that'll happen.
Thank you for the free point anyways.
(And why in the world am I actually leaving helpful stuff? I have no idea.)
on 9/7/2016 2:31:11 PM with a score of 0
Ha! That 8/8! XD
on 9/7/2016 2:22:56 PM with a score of 0
nice game person
on 9/7/2016 1:47:11 PM with a score of 0
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