Player Comments on Zombie Kill Squad

I must say. Much better then I expected.

I went into this thinking, 'here we go, another zombie story.' and thought nothing more of it. But as I started reading, I began to enjoy myself. It's far better then some zombie stories on the site. There was sufficient detail in this storygame and a decent amount of links and pages, and it kept me interested.

This is a nice balance between a game and story. The variables give it a nice gaming aspect while the reading makes me feel like i'm reading a half decent novel.

But, despite me enjoying it, it was quite random and it didn't give much information. I just know there's a zombie disease happening, but there's nothing more then that. It would have been nice to know more about this, because it left me confused.

And I also noticed a lack of emotions. It would have been far better had you fleshed out the storygame with more emotions.

I'll say the semi-good quality and length of this story kept me entertained for the ten minutes I played it. Well done. 5/8.
-- MinnieKing on 3/14/2017 12:59:51 AM with a score of 0
This wasn't a bad game but there was something holding it back and that was there was barely any details. You kept saying, "And we killed zombies" but you never described how. There was no description of the gunfire or the melee combat. It was just the bare bones of what needed to be said and that was it. It just went from point A to B and that was it. Also, I felt nothing for the characters because there was no development of them. Nobody talked so I knew nothing of their personalities, hopes, fears, dreams, etc. So when one of them died I didn't care.

There were some good parts though. For the most part you had good grammar and I liked that you recorded my kills.

4/8
-- JMgskills on 7/25/2013 1:32:36 PM with a score of 0
The truth: I did not get this game. For me, there have been way too many zombie games on this site, with them making up most of the Horror section. Only a few of these such games are actually written well.

So, that was it? No information was provided about this zombie outbreak other than that it was a zombie outbreak. Okay, so how was it started? What the heck is going on? What happens after this mission? The kills variable had, as far as I could tell, no effect on anything other than itself. This was also somewhat too easy, as I beat it on my first try.

On the good side, it employed good common sense, which is more than can be said for many of these zombie games. It isn't exactly going to be featured, although of course I would not take this off the site. I would very much like a sequel explaining this zombie outbreak. 5/8.
-- ck23838 on 7/20/2013 8:08:23 AM with a score of 0
Very fun.
-- Quorrah on 9/15/2018 6:31:39 PM with a score of 0
Story was good, but need more options. But over all a good story.
-- Maples Community Venture on 7/12/2018 11:54:43 AM with a score of 0
I must say, I found myself moving quickly through the screens, with the KILL count and DEATHS count it seemed to be arbitrary and I did find that My Deaths counter was flawed as far as I can tell. I had 1 death before we got on the chopper from the hotel, and when the helicopter took off, I mysteriously had 2?
Regardless, it was a fun romp in Zombie blasting, but not much else.
-- LuvLee on 6/29/2018 8:32:53 PM with a score of 0
Good.I l really like it.
-- ashu on 11/11/2017 3:54:13 AM with a score of 0
It would be nice if it was a little longer. Otherwise it is a good game
-- Cj2001 on 1/19/2017 10:07:53 AM with a score of 0
Great job.
Now playing part 2.
-- Stormfeather on 11/25/2016 8:19:30 PM with a score of 0
DEATHS is 0.
KILLS is 173.

Interesting game, more game than story.
-- Seto on 6/25/2016 4:11:02 PM with a score of 0
Lol, kill varibal never resets
-- Dmanxbox on 11/10/2015 3:30:51 PM with a score of 0
not one lost member lol 127 killed zombies/gun store asswholes
-- shypunk on 8/6/2015 8:51:28 PM with a score of 0
I like the story idea, it should be longer and more descriptive. Which would also give you space to work on character development. You seem to explain a bit about them but it doesn't go much further than that.
Good story nonetheless.
-- corgi213 on 7/10/2015 8:29:12 AM with a score of 0
I couldn't get over the racial pigeonholing on the first page. It just threw me off. Why was that necessary? Does it foreshadow something? Did I miss the part where their ethnic backgrounds become relevant? Why not just let me the reader imagine their appearance on my own?

You remind me of my grandmother. She's the sweetest old lady in the world, but whenever she tells a story, she has to establish the racial/ethnic background of the people involved, even if it has no relevance to the story whatsoever. I mean, seriously, Grandma. Why does it matter that the nice young man who bagged your groceries at the market was Filipino? But she has to pigeonhole everybody like that, because god forbid that anybody should act in defiance of stereotypes, and it's really sad.
-- Imrah on 6/30/2015 7:11:52 PM with a score of 0
pretty good
-- fernflame on 6/10/2015 2:38:01 AM with a score of 0
Great game, a little short though. Great spelling, punctuation, the whole nine yard when it comes to grammar. A wee bit short but very much potential. Good job Developer
-- Shadow77 on 6/8/2015 10:34:18 AM with a score of 0
It wasn't tooo bad
-- AthenaT on 5/20/2015 5:53:11 PM with a score of 0
It was pretty good.
-- Dantene on 12/18/2014 12:14:54 AM with a score of 0
"...armed with two machetes, and of Korean descent..."

Of course.
-- FazzTheMan on 9/24/2014 9:02:15 PM with a score of 0
It's both a story and a game! A bit short, but still held my attention.
-- bilbo on 7/29/2014 9:31:10 PM with a score of 0
Wow! 176 kills! This storygame was very fun to play, and thank you so much for having good grammar.
-- epiclab on 11/28/2013 1:09:42 PM with a score of 0
pretty cool but needs more parts
-- Cameron on 11/19/2013 8:30:24 PM with a score of 0
needs more choices not enough challenge
-- chris on 10/10/2013 5:48:11 PM with a score of 0
nice game.
-- walker on 8/14/2013 5:07:32 PM with a score of 0
Hey, just telling everyone that I am working on a sequel with an actual story line, score and a few other things.
-- Castaway24 on 7/25/2013 10:28:31 AM with a score of 0
It was surpisingly fun imagining the action and watching my kills rapidly increase.
-- ISentinelPenguinI on 7/24/2013 6:28:00 PM with a score of 0
I'm with some of Aman's and Skysworne's views. A bit of background of your squad would have been nice and help us connect better to them.

The choices were good but I prefer longer stories and a bit more fleshed out pages. I am fine with just one person's view of the story but I enjoy reading about the smaller or side-details. :)

Anyway's good job on the story.
-- Fireplay on 7/23/2013 1:30:43 PM with a score of 0
not bad at all! however, a lot of the gameplay aspects (which were good) could be boosted by adding more of a story behind them.
-- MagmaArmor0 on 7/21/2013 5:54:21 PM with a score of 0
Persnally I agree with ck23838, the site has lots of zombie games, so when you make one you should make it stand out.
Give a custom made story, detailing everything in a particular point of view, rather than leaving it to what others made. For example show a new way a zombie virus got out, or have the main character play as a hobo or something.


I got 173 kills and zero deaths :)
-- Aman on 7/20/2013 11:53:50 PM with a score of 0
Can be improved: use of scripting to display scores, proofreading, non 2 dimensional characters, frills, not enough tactical decisions, lack of background and mood.
-- urnam0 on 7/20/2013 9:49:07 PM with a score of 0
Well written and logical choices. I also noted the absence of a background, but to me it didn't matter. It's a zombie outbreak. Probably a virus like the other 1000 zombie movie/books/games out there. All around good job
-- Skysworne on 7/20/2013 8:56:15 PM with a score of 0
Nifty little Zombie Pomp - 145 Zombie Kills and Zero deaths =)
-- BerkaZerka on 7/20/2013 10:30:36 AM with a score of 0
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