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"wade in shark infested water"
"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"
"aren't you a little too old to be trick or treating"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG-13.
Well, zombies are alive now, sucks huh? but its okay, you have a chance. OR DO YOU?
Quite enjoyable. The high stakes throughout really made the story.
The dialogue however was quite bland and it was decently written, but enough of it wasn’t to make it a bit cliché.
The humor was a nice touch to the story. However, enough of it was present to the point where it really added off of the stakes of the story.
on 5/2/2019 3:05:04 PM with a score of 0
It needs to be longer and better
-- ashu on 11/11/2017 6:47:11 AM with a score of 0
It starts with, not be nice or have your life end. Then, you just kind of play until your eventual death.
-- Anonymous on 7/11/2017 9:19:05 PM with a score of 0
This is pretty good! If it was just a bit longer tHEN it would be 5 stars
on 2/13/2017 6:17:24 PM with a score of 0
But it was to short.
on 11/25/2016 6:49:35 PM with a score of 0
pretty good m8, niec gaem!
-- w on 5/31/2016 1:37:25 PM with a score of 0
It was kinda short, nevertheless I liked it.
on 11/25/2015 1:45:32 PM with a score of 0
on 11/9/2015 3:30:05 PM with a score of 0
on 10/18/2015 10:36:13 AM with a score of 0
This story is too linear, and how is calling for help gonna save you when stabbing the zombie won't?
on 10/18/2015 10:34:47 AM with a score of 0
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