Thanks! I'll read that, and see if it helps. The thing that would REALLY help would be if someone actually wrote the first page for me. But that isn't gonna happen, unless I'm in Heaven. 

Can you guys help me out? I want to write a sci-fi story involving a race of blue octopi that want to devour all of Earth's children. They make a high-pitched, screeching sort of noise and they smell of rotting eggs. I wanted to do a first page, before the story like a Prologue. Can you help me out?

Oh, by the way, My story is called Plutonium and if you want to know more, then PM me or post here. Thank you. 

Oh, and my Grammar sucks.

I just noticed that as well!

Oh, may I ask, do you guys swear on the forums? Because I don't like swearing. If it's used not very often it's okay, but if it's used excessively then I won't be using the forums.

Hello. I am CafeMystery. I came to this write to write stories and that's pretty much it, so you won't find me in the forums much. I like the color purple, and I am a fan of Jazz music. So, I shall greet you with a salute and a goodbye.