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Or maybe they model after crackheads because the protag is a crackhead, and he brought crack over to their island thing. Good idea

Working on my story, and I've changed the plot like four times. Do you think trailer park crackheads could count as a primitive tribal society? Like a small trailer park though, not a big one. If not, then a raider clan in an post apocalyptic setting could work right?

Plenty of people would show up. A bunch of big burly Samoans, some policemen, and the paramedics, if I had to guess.

Reminder that Hitler's supposed goal of restoring power to Germany was noble as well. The process he used was less than desirable though.

Good ol’ guitar strings. I like the gold plated acoustic ones, they’re shiny and pretty.

I suppose if you were a cat it could be…

thanks for the feedback and I’m glad you enjoyed the poem!

One edgy poem for all those dark broody people, and one wholesome one to bring your mood up after! ________ I NEED IT ------------- I need it I need it I need it I need it like water It flows down my throat and nourishes me I need it like air It fills my lungs with life I need it like blood It flows through my veins and fuels every muscle I want it I want it I want it I want it like a cool sea breeze It soothes my soul and my mind I want it like a lover's embrace It fills me with warmth I want it like a movie It entertains me for hours Yet I don't need it It sticks me like a thorn and drains me of blood and life Yet I don't want it It ruins everything I hold dear _______ strings! --------------------- Strings are really cool A really useful tool They can drag a box up a hill They can tie sense to a fool They can be wrapped around a reel And they can drag a floaty out a pool!

I didn’t feel obligated, it came straight from the heart 😊. It was a labor of love.

Make sure you delete the tab for the page, save changes after changing to the advanced editor, then if that doesn't work, save the storygame/chapter to reload all pages and update them. Then it should work. Also, it has to be both advanced variables and advanced scripts, make sure you're using both. And if the title is already taken but your dead set on using it, just add punctuation and it should work. Makes it a little more dramatic. Like instead of just 'I'm a Fag', it's 'I'm a Fag!'. See?