Thanks for the answers, it's truly appreciated!

A question I have about my story concerns about the main character. I know the custom for this site is to not give them a name and refer to them as "you." But if my story works better by giving him/her a name, should I just give them a name? Or do I change my story to make it better accommodate the "you" tradition?

Thanks for the help if any is given!

Thanks for the input! The main complaint with the story was length. I did not want to publish a huge story and it not get well received. I was not sure of my writing ability. But since people did seem to like what was there, I will make a new one that will be much, much longer and more branching. Thanks again. See ya when I finish the next one!

    Hi there. I finally made my first game! I would greatly appreciate it, if you where to read it and critique me on it. It is called The Clash: prologue. Thanks in advance!