You play as Dan, his life about to be turned upside down. He thinks hes regular, which he sees as boring, little does he know on this normal day his whole life will change. For the better or worse? Well that's up to you.

OK so this is my first attempt so give me some feedback, I'm only a young-an so help me out :D I may want to be an author so feedback people.

Sure mate, if you still need a few I'm ready and happy to help!! :D

Sounds good man, if you get the writing and story right and its in depth also detailed it'd be well received by everyone (pretty much) including me!! Hows it going so far?