Proof of writing

A fan fiction storygame by Zelefas

Player Rating?/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"

Based on 5 ratings so far

Story Difficulty1/8

"No possible way to lose"

Play Length2/8

"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"

Maturity Level1/8

"Appropriate for all ages"

Stories with this maturity level will not, by design, have any potentially objectionable content. An example of a type story with this rating would be a quiz on mathematics.

Player Comments

There is some atmosphere building up here, clearly leading to a horrific climax, but some game mechanics leave me circling aimlessly, being chased by the nameless creature.
It's a good way to build the story- describing in a limited, strange vocabulary, hinting at the time and place and history that may have led to this. No spoilers from me! But if the writer can complete this story with a fitting ending, I'd be willing to rate it much higher.

— JohnX on 1/17/2025 8:09:51 PM with a score of 0

This story seems to be incomplete. Either there is an unexpected ending, or I get stuck in a loop where I'm being "Hunted", which does offer some ways out, but those only lead to the "Hunted" page again.