It might help if you told people a little more about your story, such as the genre and who the main character is. The more info you can provide without spoiling things the better I think.
Is it the same story as City of Fire that you just published?
If you need someone to help I can read through your story when you have finished writing to check for mistakes and make suggestions before you publish. :)
No worries, just pm or tag me in a thread if you need any help :)
Cool :)