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Talks Of A Possible March Contest?

18 years ago

For the March Contest what if I decided what it was?  Here is one type of adventure almost never explored before.  In this contest the only games aloud will be BASIC.  The topic is none the less none-the-less Conversations.  If Alex Papadomulis agrees this contest could be the march contest.  Some special features for each game would be:

  • Publish it and when somebody has something different for a scene ask them to put it in there comment.  Than unpublish and add it.
  • Non-linearlity - Make one talk spawn the need to talk to another person and in that same conversation make it spark interest of another person.
  • Loop Around - Lets say one conversation leads back to the other guy.  You see him again and the conversation repeats.
  • Each conversation (if multiple) has more that 3 links per page with 3 conversation lines (or 2 if two could lead to the same thing just different words.
  • Some Qs change storyline
  • A sense or adventure - If it is all talk to this guy, I probably would give it a thumbs down.

How will you be judged?

I will judge the games out of 50 points.  Each subject is 10pts. each so bombing one will hurt you.

  1.   Adventure?  If there is no adventure to the game and it is Hello - Hello - Hows the Weather? type thing than you will definatly bomb this.
  2. Grammer - Dont be link this this is not how to do things this itself will lose you major points
  3.  Spelling - Is that spelled right? Don't spell like redeye.  He has one feature that alex rejected cause he couldn't understand it!
  4.   Features used - I know it's basic but there are still many many posiblities.
  5.   Finally - did you follow the rules?  Using advanced features (Alex could somehow figure this out) will take away all your points for this catagorey.

Note that this is not, I repeat, not official in any way or form.  It is mearly an idea.  If you don't get the idea I'll tell you on a later date.

Talks Of A Possible March Contest?

18 years ago
LOL, stupid judging criteria.  1/5 of it is your actual writing prowess.  3/5 are just reading rules and proofreading. 1/5 is just creativity with the editor. I repeat, LOL!

Talks Of A Possible March Contest?

18 years ago

Rejudging notice:

1.  Adventure will be half of your points.

2.  Grammer is 5 points.

3.  Spelling is 5 points (and possibly might get you disqualified)

4. Features Used - 10 pts. still.  Use as many possible ideas to make the game conversation friendly.

5.  Following rules are worth 5pts and could get you disqualifed.

Talks Of A Possible March Contest?

18 years ago
Out of 70

30 - Storyline/telling
15 - Different puzzles and a diversity
10 - Length
10 - Spelling and Grammar
5 - Spark (Like Humour, suspence, etc...)

Talks Of A Possible March Contest?

18 years ago

Out of 65:

his except that length is 5 points and the only way to lose those is to get under a 4 in your game.

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18 years ago
Nononono.  Length is 10, you get 0 if its below 5, 5-6 is worth 5-6.  7 Is worth 8 and 8 is worth 10.

Talks Of A Possible March Contest?

18 years ago

That would be unfair to those who can't come on all the time and those that don't know touch typing like you.

I say 5 if its over 3.

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18 years ago
Legnth shouldn't be worth 10 pts.  Think about it.  You could easily get 10 pts. but there are only a few people who can.

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18 years ago
YOU DELETED MY BEAUTIFUL TABLE!

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18 years ago
Yes.  It is biased against those who can't come on the site every single day to edit it.

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18 years ago
YOU STILL DELETED MY TABLE, HOW DARE YOU!

Talks Of A Possible March Contest?

18 years ago
Throw your avatar at me.  See what happens oh "the JJJ".

Talks Of A Possible March Contest?

18 years ago
I didn't see what was deledted, however if it's just a simple table of points, you shouldn't delete that stuff. Please delete only post that are innapropriate (spam, flames, etc).

I would have been interested to see it

Talks Of A Possible March Contest?

18 years ago

Well, basically it was saying:

Length of 3 gets 1 points while a length of 8 would get 10.  I think that would be more biased against slow typers and those who can't come on everyday (exactly the opposite of JJJ) because they would get 7 or so points less.

Making it 5 points based on if the game is above a 3 or not would work though or possibly how long does it take to reach a good ending would do fine for the points.

Talks Of A Possible March Contest?

18 years ago
HAVACOMAN!  YOU STILL CANNOT DELETE THINGS, JUST BECAUSE YOU FEEL LIKE IT!  NEVER!

Talks Of A Possible March Contest?

18 years ago
Okay.  Quit yelling.  I'm in a library.

Talks Of A Possible March Contest?

18 years ago
This is interesting to think about.

I should add that spelling/grammar shouldn't be given "points" -- but should deduct points from your score if they take away from the story.

Talks Of A Possible March Contest?

18 years ago
Ya, believe me I know all about that....

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18 years ago

First of all, i just cannot resist making a comment about part of your post Havacoman:

"2: Grammer - Dont be link this this is not how to do things this itself will lose you major points" --Havacoman

Come on man! How are you going to judge good grammer when this is the "sentence" that you post explaining that we must have good grammer? I didnt even understand what you said except the last part. "this itself will lose you major points" Not trying to be mean or anything. The irony of it was just too much for me.

Secondly: I dont really understand your contest guidelines. None-the-less conversation story with at least 3 links per page that connect with other conversations? Also, conversations that repeat and loop around to the beginning? Were those supposed to be things NOT to do for the story? It is really quite confusing.

Also i dont really think a contest should have a "point" system. Many things that make a great adventure story cannot me measured with some system of points. It is more abstract than that. A good adventure story can be good for many many different reasons.

Talks Of A Possible March Contest?

18 years ago
I concur.  About the Irony, I think that he waws trying to show you bad grammar....

Talks Of A Possible March Contest?

18 years ago
i agree. and to be honoust(yes i know its spelled wrong), i hate this idea for a march contest, why not have a specific game category, or just plain and simple basic game.

Talks Of A Possible March Contest?

18 years ago
Y'know.  Thosse are words of wisdom.  I linfang your opinion and adapt it as my own!

Talks Of A Possible March Contest?

18 years ago

ummm, guys how about we just leave the contest making up to the guys who run the place... you know, alex, march, choco. ring a bell with anyone? lets not forget our jobs here people. they run the site, we make games and try to weed out bad posts and comments (atleast the mods do.). just make games people.

nate

Talks Of A Possible March Contest?

18 years ago
exactly!

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18 years ago
Not true.  Well, kinda partly true.  I talk to Alex on msn and we often discuss the sites features.  I've helped him quite alot, I've designed new length formulas, etc..  Your job is what you make it.  If you choose to help with features and make games and post Ideas on forums, then so  be it.  I think we need to lay off Havacoman, its not our poblem he doesn't like to make games.  Also, whats the FWW for if were only here to make games?

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18 years ago

if we dont worry about making games then we wouldnt need a FWW lol. and we have all done alot to help alex. there a a whole list of names that have contributed to the site. ive never had probs with havy either. he loves MAG, hes cool with me. lol

nate

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18 years ago
I think we've come to an agreement, I think...

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18 years ago

Don't forget I put the word Possible in the Subject.  It looks like not many people like the idea though.

The grammer thing was supposed to be like that on purpose.  I never ever write like that.

Sorry if you couldn't understand me in the second point Axe.

I contruibute to the site by giving ideas to make it better for game makers.  Remember that more options in games equal more opurtunites to make an epic.

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18 years ago
I don't get this. DO i have put up the avatar again?
Grammer Grammar

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18 years ago

i would agree to a contest with the following rules.

it must be a basic game, no scores or objects.  Aside from your text the only other thing that would be allowed would be pictures. 

The best game would then go to the best writer, length not being an issue.

thoughts?

march

Talks Of A Possible March Contest?

18 years ago

Holy catfish batman, i think you got something there. a contest that judges writing ability. wow, thats a great idea. thats why you are needed march.

nate

Talks Of A Possible March Contest?

18 years ago
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO, not basic, please not basic, thats giving an advantadge to you basic people, us advanced people dont remember the basic and  have all of our ideas plotted out in our home world the advanced editor.  NOT THOSE RULES< PLEASSSSSEEEE!

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18 years ago
i am fine with that, just i like the adv environment better. I wish we could do a game in the advanced editor and have limitations of a basic game.

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18 years ago
Ya,  I would be fine with that.

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18 years ago

Hey wait.  Your March and the contest we are talking about is in March!

I hope you are more active during March.

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18 years ago
Blah, blah, blah.  He's busy, live with it.

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18 years ago
lol havac can put two and two together lol kidding

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18 years ago
HAHAHAHA, that just hit me, LOL.

Talks Of A Possible March Contest?

18 years ago

March's Madness contest will be announced in the beginning of march.  those of you posting here have a heads up.  There will be more requirements given when we make the announce, but the game will have to be as simple as possible - only feature usable will be pics, but can be made on advanced or basic editors.

march

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18 years ago
Ah! So no score, variables, items?

Talks Of A Possible March Contest?

18 years ago
exactly.

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18 years ago

What about pics?

This contest seems interesting

Also, when does it have to be started?

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18 years ago
I don't think my idea is in.

Talks Of A Possible March Contest?

18 years ago

each game entered in a specific contest would have to be started AFTER the first of that month that its to be entered in. however, as of right now there is no March contest rules yet. so we will have to wait.

nate

Talks Of A Possible March Contest?

18 years ago
I think this should be in april now. march is going to be out in 1 more day.

Talks Of A Possible March Contest?

18 years ago
We may not have another actually.