(Try not to take any of this personally, I'm just trying to help you out.)
I took a look at your story, and I don't recommend publishing it. It only has 383 words right now, and if that's half way, then it will not do well and will likely be unpublished soon after.
Besides that, what you have right now is meh at best. It's not really interesting to read and there's not much of a story there. The grammar and spelling is ok, but there are several errors in it. I would highly recommend reading articles and other stories on the site to get an idea of the quality and effort expected in a storygame here.