Non-threaded

Forums » Writing Workshop » Read Thread

Find proofreaders here, useful resources, and share opinions and advice on story crafting.

Need to see if it needs more?

3 years ago

Here's the prompt - - -

You are the smartest kid in class, more importantly your entire school. and while out with your mom you witness an attempted stabbing in which you disarm the guy and stab him the throat. Since it was on self defense you face no chages. Then you realize the adrenaline rush in the kill as you go from an A grade student to Worlds Evilest Serial Killer! How will your journey end? Will you get caught? Or will you let yourself SPIRAL loose?

That is the idea for my story comment on what i should add in it or see what it could be. Any questions welcome. Thanks

Need to see if it needs more?

3 years ago

Character sounds like a mary sue

Need to see if it needs more?

3 years ago

The site does need more serial killer protags tho so you're on the right track