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A Fun Little Poem for Halloween..

one month ago

In the realms of spookiness,
Let's cheer,
For Halloween!
With bats as dark as the darkness, and creepy creatures gather together, if you're a human and a seer...

You might get quite a fright, with spooky skeletons arriving at people's doors,
And menacing witches brewing up a potion or two,
It's Halloween, the day we embrace-
The day where frightening sights comes, where black cats mew,

The rising of bad luck, comes out to you, gives you not a helping hand, but a spooky glare,
It turns and twists your day into a frightening nightmare,
Halloween is the time of ghouls and monsters rise,
And as you stare....

Be sure to watch out for a scary surprise,
Or you'll never know what'll happen.....BOO!

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Feel free to give me feedback on this short, little poem! 

A Fun Little Poem for Halloween..

one month ago
Very whimsical.

But hey, as long as I'm here, we need to talk about this "Pet Stimulator" you're writing. Because I don't think that phrase means what you think it means.

A Fun Little Poem for Halloween..

one month ago
Now that's nice. Now you can make another, hope it's still sweet.