Try writing death scenes ITS SO FUN! lIKE THIS IJUST OFF THE TOP OF MY HEAD.
As the sword that took his life impaled his stomach, the dark wind ruffled his hair. His lifeless fingers gripped at nothingness and his dead eyes searched the afterlife for some sort of exit. He slumped to the ground, oblivious to the world around him. And the sun shines on.
That was an OK sequence. If I spend time I can make it better.