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So, I have finished a safe web browsing video that the administration for the Escambia County School district. I am going to send it to them in a second but I want to see if there was anything that can be improved.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0BzXWEM44iXP0ZVROUTdSRDM1N3c/view?usp=sharing

Two things stuck out, really. At 00:28, you didn't cut out the "action" at the beginning of the clip, and you could stand to up the volume of the "what's going on?" line at 00:46.

Also, did someone leave the metronome on for the song at 00:31, or...?

Whoa, I did not see that.

Yeah, can't have the volume higher than -12B for production reasons.

Are you able to do any compression, limiting, or lowering of the sting, then?

I can try to make her voice sound more forceful.

Amanda is an awful actor. Replace her.

I cant, I have a deadline to send this. I would have to redo the shot nd it would conflict with my storyboard.

You need to work on your maniacal victory dance. The moves were fine enough for a mad villain, but your facial expression told me that this was your first hacking rodeo and that you were only doing this because you thought that's what villains did when they hacked people. We need grins of schadenfreude.

Gotcha.

Thank you all for the helpful criticism! I will try to adjust the video as best to my ability. Not Sarcasm. 

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