Hey. I know all of my storygames have been crap and have all been taken down so far, so I wanted to get some feedback on a new storygame I'm making. If you like it, I'll keep working on it. If you don't, I'll take it down and work on something else. Suggestions are welcome!
Which one is it?
The school massacre. (What? I've been playing FNaF lately.)
Well, it seems that my storygame was unpublished. Guess it wasn't good enough.
It was unfinished, had terrible grammar, used too many exclamation marks and too many capital letters. There was no character development, and the plot was out of control starting at the very first page. The setting had no effort put into it, and the story itself also had a mere 699 words.
Of course it was unpublished.