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Questions about a storygame? Thoughts on Eternal? Any other IF you're playing out there?

Dead End

17 years ago

Dead End is finally finished! Please play and tell me what you guys think. I hope you guys have as much fun playing it as I did making it! (actually, I hope it's a little more fun than that)

riley

Dead End

17 years ago
Length please.

Dead End

17 years ago
6

riley

Dead End

17 years ago
Pages I meant.

Dead End

17 years ago

162. Pretty short.

riley

Dead End

17 years ago
Phew! Not contest worthy :)

Dead End

17 years ago

It's advanced anyway. Besides, my game sucks shit compared to some of the other contest worthy games. I just hope you guys like it. I spent forever on it, andwant to prove your predictin about it wrong

riley

Dead End

17 years ago

HOLY SHIT JJJ-THEBANISHER JUST GAVE MY GAME A 7!

lol, Thanks man! I want to remind of your prediction, though:

Hmm...  This is gonna be a battle of Grammar and linearity.

If the Grammar and paragraphing is reasonable then it could be a 5, or MAYBE a 6.  (This depends on length, story, interactivity and linearity. Zombie Stories are'nt going higher then 6.

riley

Dead End

17 years ago

oh, wait was that your rating? I just noticed it also has a 5...

riley

Dead End

17 years ago

I'm kinda embarrassed now...

riley

Dead End

17 years ago
I gave it a 7, but I definintly havn't gotten a good feel for the game.  I didn't want to rate it low without playing it thoroughly first.

Dead End

17 years ago

Oh, ok. How far did you play into it?

riley

Dead End

17 years ago
Not far.  I want to wait until I'm fully awake first.

Dead End

17 years ago

ok. I was hoping it would be featured, but with Ground zero and Captured out, that's not gonna happen. :(

riley

Dead End

17 years ago

oh, captured is modern adventure, but still.

riley

Dead End

17 years ago

Rofl, It could still get featured.  Would you like to take a sneak peak of my game so far?

Dead End

17 years ago

Sure, you gonna add me as coauthor?

riley

Dead End

17 years ago
Done

Dead End

17 years ago

bump

riley

Dead End

17 years ago
We've got some sorta awesome streak going on. 4 straight awesome games released.  Ima make it 5 if i i can go quick..

Dead End

17 years ago
Hi Darth! I just finished your story, and thought it was pretty great. Well written, lots to do, and I loved the humor. I haven't played to the end yet, because I kept dying. I don't really like horror at all, so I only ended up giving it a 6, but I might up the score to a 7 as well, next time I play, because it really is well done. Yes, I could picture this as a featured game. (I don't think you have to worry about 'Captured' because I don't think 'Captured' is 'featured' material.)

Dead End

17 years ago
I'm with tsmpaul on this one.

Dead End

17 years ago

id agree with tsm and jjj because i played the game through a couple of times to get the different (even bad) endings just to find some dv humor. it was good and if it doesntr get featured that would be shame.

 

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