I published my first story, "The Murder Mystery," I spent tons of time over the last week working on it. When I was on, I spent nearly 98% of my time working on it. I spell checked, and reviewed the story once. I quickly reviewed it, because I spell checked it. It has a length of 6. I just wanted to say I hope it is decent at least, because I worked hard on it. But creative criticism is accepted too. :)