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Sooo... I was bored, and instantly got an idea: Aliens abduct a guy.

Basic Plot: The reader is stargazing one night, when suddenly, a UFO flies by. The reader runs into their house, but is soon captured by the aliens. The reader wakes up in a room, but escapes after sewing some metal onto their clothing for armor, which the metal malfunctions the electric barrier. The reader then runs into a room with five doors after being chased by some aliens, and obtaining an alien blaster.

Gameplay: Basically your average story. Nothin' too fancy.

The Rest: I added an easter egg where the reader goes into a room with six cryogenic chambers, each occupied by one of the members of the site.

So, anyone want to play test it or help me out?

Whose in the chambers? 

Me, Aman, Sentinel, Drakilian, Madbrad200, and James. I would add more, but I don't feel like cramming in descriptions for more people.

EDIT: If you want a cameo, check this thread out.

I'd play it, but I can never remember the format for getting the unpublished game link to work. XD

Then click on that link down there!

Goddamn Aliens!

Thanks!

"hug hole in your roof" = "huge hole in your roof"

"A Few Ours Later" = "A Few Hours Later"

I'd add more choices to the second page (and add more pages there, for that matter). The protagonist does a lot of stuff without choosing to, and I think you could expand that into actual gameplay instead.

But yeah, so far so good! ^_^

Thanks for the feedback! I'll be sure to add more to it in a bit (or a while).

You didn't add... *sputter* 

I said "or a while'!

I never really finished this...

Anyway, I'm gonna necro this and say that THE STORY IS BACK ON!

Well, I'm remaking this story, and rather than making a new thread, I'll just necro this one.