90 Minute Storygame: Prepare To Die

-My comments have small spoilers for those who have not read, and intend on reading, “90 Minute Storygame: Prepare To Die”.-
The short story itself was edited nicely, and I found it rather easy to make sense of the situations and choices presented. I knew when to use the bow and sword because of how well you had written your work. The little dialog and descriptive narration within the writing was not disappointing, but clear. Through this, I was able to understand what each character was saying, and how it held weight within the game. There was also a clear setting, meaning, I knew where I was within the story, and I understood the clear dangers and obstacles that were thrown at me. Even though you had written the game within ninety minutes, it flowed well. The story did not go off on a tangent or randomly deviate from the set course you were trying to reach.
With that said, I was left with some complaints and concerns about the reading itself. I do wish you had put more of an effort into the beginning of the game to properly expound upon the protagonist’s history. For example: who is this person, and why should I feel anything for him or her? Clarifying how he or she had gotten into the situation would have done well in adding to, and revealing this history. It would have also been wise to include the crucial events that lead up to the war, which would also help explain the reason for beginning the Battle. You also could have described the field itself, perhaps adding to the setting in a positive way while simultaneously painting a better image for the reader.
Unfortunately, because of the lack of details given, I found the story to be too short with a lot left to be desired. This also means that there is just as much room for improvement if you choose to continue writing and expanding on the universe this story was written in.
The ending I was able to reach was also well crafted, and helped explain an interesting turn within the battle itself. Even though it was short, I was able to clearly see the climax the story had reached as well as the falling action that shortly followed. Story wise, you have a good concept. I sincerely wish there was more to read, but I recommend changing the title of the game, it is quite deceptive.

While it was pretty clear what your choice should be most of the time, the last choice was very sudden and had little foreshadowing to make an informed decision.
I didn't like that it really didn't matter what you picked, since you'll end up at the same point anyways.
I understand that this was written in a short amount of time, but I still feel like there could have been a bit more to the plot twist and main antagonist.
That said, it was very clear and concise, edited pretty well, and the idea of the main antagonist would be more interesting in a longer storygame.

Well written with no obvious SPAG issues. Very short and to the point as expected. The sudden introduction of a primary antagonist without any foreshadowing was an interesting choice by the author. It is well paced for the short length and is a good illustration of item usage in the system.

Had a blast with this one - short and sweet.

Fun to play , could be longer

Don't feel like a long comment. Interesting idea, but was quite stale and pointless. I'm sorry for being blunt, but it could certainly use some more umph: some story, some more important choices and impact, and some more interactability. Still has potential though.

There are only two real endings. (Unless you count getting killed by a dumb decision)

It's a good game, nonetheless...

EDIT: I just realized that the 90 minutes refers to the fact that it took 90 minutes to make. Not 90 minutes to play. Very good for that.

fun simple and good

fun ass game

really fun to play in the middle of math class :)
I got the good ending, where we live :) GG everyone