A Day Of School, part I

A family friendly storygame by UnStriped_Tiger

Player Rating1.52/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"

Based on 12 ratings since
Played times (finished )

Story Difficulty1/8

"No possible way to lose"

Play Length2/8

"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"

Maturity Level2/8

"Choking hazard for children under 4"

Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 6. To compare to the movie rating system, this would be G.

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Part of Series

This is about a simple school day. You do work, you talk to friends, and you eat lunch and breakfast.

I know the game is short, but it's only part one. I'll make a part two if this game gets good reviews.

There are three endings, one of which is a bit of a secret ending. Kinda.

Go easy, this is my first game. I'm going to spend the next few months making a game called 'One Wish'.

Let me know if there's any problem. :D

Player Comments

Good start, keep it up! :)

— Sam on 6/27/2017 4:22:36 AM with a score of 0

Multi-part storygames here usually have each 'part' work as story in it's own right with a plot and conflict to resolve, and are long enough it makes sense to split them up.

This is less than seven hundred words without most of the usual things a story requires to really count as a story, and I'm honestly not sure what the point was.

I get that you're new, but there's no rush and no reason to slam down on that publish button until you have something you can be proud of. Next time I'd recommend working out a fully developed plot with characters and conflict, and keep in mind the Writer's Workshop is always available if you need advice or feedback.

— Mizal on 6/26/2017 6:56:16 PM with a score of 0

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