As The Bell Tolls

A horror storygame by Theend

Player Rating?/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"

Based on 9 ratings so far

Story Difficulty6/8

"Wandering through the desert"

Play Length4/8

"A well spent lunch break"

Maturity Level5/8

"Aren't you a little too old to be trick or treating"

Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG-13.

Tags

RPG

War

Zombie

A mixture of genres but i will just put in Horror. Choose between the stories of Muramasa, Zero, or Daisuke. please give me criticism, not on the spelling or simple grammar mistakes but on the semicolon and major mistakes. Like plot or story mistakes. oh and if someone could tell me if i can make variables show on one page but not the other, that'd be great.

Player Comments

Since everyone else has already flipped out on you, I'll say something positive. Once this is finished and refined it will be pretty cool as far as I can estimate. Combat needs work though. PM when you finish so I can give you a better rating.

— ugilick on 6/16/2013 9:30:18 PM with a score of 0

What the hell?! DON'T PUBLISH UNFINISHED GAMES!!! Half the links led no where and one character nope end game.

— hugo23 on 6/16/2013 2:44:47 PM with a score of 0

i know it has been said but i will restate it do not publish an unfinished game. post a preview in the workshop if you want it reviewed but do not publish the game

— JamesValkyrie on 6/16/2013 1:11:59 PM with a score of 0

DO. NOT. PUBLISH. UNFINISHED. GAMES. FOR. FEEDBACK.
Post in the writing workshop in the forums a link to the game if you want feedback.

— galobtter on 6/16/2013 9:40:31 AM with a score of 0

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