Best Friend's Boyfriend

So if you don't get your nose in to other people's business, you will get Rainer and killed.

This got really dark really fast.

PS: Fair warning, that picture that you use for the description of the game (above) is fanart of an actual anime series.

I'm sorry to say this, but I felt like being sick in a bucket after reading this, no offence.

There's no choice besides consented sex and nonconsensual sex. Complete the other paths, and focus less on your wet dreams.

Its either being raped by thug or by chris -_-

It's quite hard to follow and doesn't explain enough of the story to really make a connection to the reader.

It seems like you put some effort into this, but it could be improved a lot.
First: I'm not sure the best mental image for me to be starting the game with is Angela and the player character learning to use the toilet.
Also, I don't think you need the giant infodump about the band at the beginning, especially the "this color hair, this color eyes, no tattoos, no piercings" repetition for each guy.
Considering that intro, I thought the game would be about dating those guys, but no- apparently my choices are Angela's boyfriend or back alley rape.

Just...wtf? The choices are the illusion of, "choose this option or the story will terminate". Your grammar actually started out good, then slowly began to decline, but not in a serious way that made it painful to read. A little short, but not a big issue for a first. I give this a 3/8, because although there does seem to be some work put into this, the lack of real choices as well as the awkwardness I feel when reading it does not bring any enlightenment.

I loved it, please make another one