Epic Peak Hike

I thought the choices in the beginning were given enough information to make a decision.

I personally choice 3, and was surprised that there was so much more to the story if you just ran past the deer! My first run through, I ran passed it, and immediately made it to the top. So like the description states, it's an easy route!

Overall good story! If you had more time, I bet it would be even better.

I really liked this story. It was really well written. I like the choices I was given and it well described the options that were available to me. It felt like I was really on a hike

The story idea is pretty fun, I laughed a couple times, but mostly I was a frustrated gamer--so many pathways lead to a Game Over, and I'm still not sure I won--maybe that's the point! Nature took us over! One area of improvement that I see is giving the player less choices and more ways to build off each play. Great job!

class comment here,
it's short, and has potential to be much more interesting! Enjoyed your story telling!