InSaNiTy: A Jeff/Jane The Killer Story

Now I'm just thinking about a girl repeatedly stabbing a dead body and every time the knife goes in a very loud SPLAT just echoes and I lose it every time.

Anyway, it was really short. Many storygames here have plenty of potential but people lose interest and that just ruins everything. At that point, you're holding an idea somebody could use and make a better storygame out of it. It's also pretty linear, but it's actually not too bad in that area. More options would make it more fun and also longer, so you're killing two birds with one stone.

The writing itself was decent, although quite choppy. Nevertheless, it was a fun, short read. I gave it a 3/8, but I could see it being rated higher after a few revisions.

Decent job.

it wasnt amzing

AWESOME!! jane and jeff would love it!!!! (-^-)

such a amazing game it was scary it was entertaining well done!

This is a very interesting story and I definitely would recommend.

awsooommmeee

A true Masterpiece

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I LiKeD iT...SHHH...GO TO SLEEP...

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