Love's journey through the woods Part 1

To add to previous comment, because I forgot since I still have human tendencies, the story is repetive and, though fairly well written, the mainl problem is capitilazion errors.

It was ok and fairly well written though I'm not really sure how it's romance since it mainly focused on your life out of college, also *slight spoiler, no details*, I found it strange that even after I knew about Sam I called him repeatedly, that didn't make sense.

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I love this I must read part 2

Work on your grammar, make sure the choices you integrate within the story actually matter, and develop your plot more efficiently. Proofreading could actually help a lot too. Also, 'To be continued...' endings are completely taboo within the cyoa genre - or atleast in my opinion they are.
Work on improving your skills as a writer.

Needs MORE. . .

Not that much of an actual game... I have spotted a few grammar problems, I'll let you notice them.

Also, this too short, the pages were also too short and lacked any details whatsoever, it's mediocre for a starter, you can improve, I'm sure of it!

I love this. I like that it's the first game that i DIDN'T die!

There's no real choices as you just keep going round in circles. Needs to be planned better and branch off into different story arcs with different outcomes.

Love!! crazy!!