Some Short Storygames

All comments below this one are from the beta wich only included the storygame Slender.com

Boring, plot was bad, insanely short, and it seemed like it was written by a two year old.

I just want to say something. Someone has cut all the capital letters in half, turning them low.

This story is somehow, even shorter than a demo. The plot of this story is non-existing thus making it dull and boring. It is also too linear! You immediately end the game when you pick the choice, Options. Why did you include that in the first place?

I'm gonna quote a lot of sentences from Will's How not to write a story. Rule 8: Don't pretend to offer players choices if your story is linear anyway. That is shown in the first ever choice which is the Start choice and Options choice.

Rule 10: Use Capitalization and Punctuation or your readers will assume you are a five year old. Yeah, You're probably a 1-12 year old. Please use Capitalization and punctuation properly. The only part that has any capital letters is the first and second page.

Lastly, Rule 2: Do not Plagarize. Don't plagarize Slenderman if you're gonna make it a horrible story. It's even on the horror category instead of the Fan Fiction category. This is one of the worst games on this sites. It's even worst than those Warrior Cat games!

My score for you is 1/8. I won't bother creating a longer comment because this story will probably get unpublished. Good luck on your next story though!

No.

Very linear, and it seems someone has slaughtered all the capital letters.
1/8.

I came back to this site a couple of weeks ago after a long time away from it to discover that a purge policy had been instated. I was up until now hesitant about the policy, thinking that more storygames were still a good thing, whether they were much good or not.

Well, I can safely say that I am now 100% in support of purging.