Team 7: The Estranger's Interactive Story
A
historical
storygame by
Gaekkeren
Player Rating
3.72/8
"Too few ratings to be ranked"
Based on
12 ratings
since 11/14/2024
Played 124 times (finished 24)
Story Difficulty
2/8
"Walk in the park"
Play Length
3/8
"A nice jog down the driveway"
Maturity Level
7/8
"Anything goes"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 18. If this were a movie, it would probably be R.
Tags
Class Project
-Plz gib go0d m@rk$-
Player Comments
This was actually pretty decent, most school projects that show up here are not.
It wasn't ever defined what GEMEIN and GESELL meant, I have a vague idea from looking up the German meaning though. Similarly I think more could've been done to establish the characters and their backgrounds and roles in the village, there are several names thrown at the reader right out of the gate, but not a lot of other info is given to distinguish them.
The story overall feels like it was a little too short, but that means it was all made enough and with an interesting enough concept that I'd like to have seen more options and endings and a bit more descriptive detail to explore the themes.
I agree with Suranna that the description is the worst part of it though, something to indicate the actual contents would be useful--this is going to be up on the site long after you get your grade from the assignment.
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Mizal
on 11/14/2024 5:29:42 AM with a score of 0
that being said, this is actually interesting, i found myself replaying this mini story game multiple times. and yes sadly i am a gamer
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— potato on 11/14/2024 3:33:19 AM with a score of 0
i keep getting confused by the names :(
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— potato on 11/14/2024 3:18:48 AM with a score of 0
unique approach
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— maryly on 11/14/2024 3:04:19 AM with a score of 0
Very nice you guys - Good...to poop on, hard not to laugh out loud!
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— Prof on 11/14/2024 3:01:24 AM with a score of 0
interesting approach
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— maryly on 11/14/2024 3:00:19 AM with a score of 0
Too wordy, lack visuals, some options are redundant like 'Months later'. Interesting story, but fair attempt at execution. Could have been better. However, we love the lore, and how it aligns with the concept/topic we are covering today. Good job!!!
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— Organic Solidarity on 11/14/2024 2:53:40 AM with a score of 0
It’s pretty good for a short school project, but I do wish the story description was a little less misleading. I thought this was some sort of joke storygame at first glance.
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Suranna
on 11/14/2024 2:17:12 AM with a score of 0
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