The Insanity Complex

This is quite ambitious for your first story, and quite successful as far as I'm concerned. Your scripting/items worked smoothly and your writing is up to par. If you can incorporate some more meaningful choices and more difficulty or complexity into your next story, it will surely be worthy of even greater accolades.

it ok

It was very fun, but it took a while to figure out what to do in the ending sequence.

Umm...The game was okayish.The exit was a little hard to navigate.Had 3 runs with the game,a slightly varying experience but nothing drastic.

Good for one shotting through.

Stalke Welsh Strikes Again.

It was very good. Like every story, it had a few grammatical and spelling errors, but here they were few and far between. 'Pyjamas' was one of the ones that I noticed, but it was not too bad anywhere, really....
I liked the concept; it was a really good idea for a story game, and like Loon said, it is good for a first game. This was made quite a long time ago, but you still have my review.
I gave it 6/8.

I really enjoyed this game. Each situation feels natural and realistic and gives the reader a sense of freedom.

good job on this one

I was surprised by the good plot and great gameplay. I only wanted more to play.

This game is very well written

Good use of the advanced editors. I wish there had been more attention paid to minor details like the spelling. I would have minimized the number of useless items as well.