The Tale Of Despair

A fantasy storygame by SkiesOfChaosAndRed

Player Rating2.55/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"

Based on 11 ratings since
Played times (finished )

Story Difficulty2/8

"Walk in the park"

Play Length3/8

"A nice jog down the driveway"

Maturity Level1/8

"Appropriate for all ages"

Stories with this maturity level will not, by design, have any potentially objectionable content. An example of a type story with this rating would be a quiz on mathematics.

Tags

Fantasy

Humor

It's the typical tale with lovely twists... Which side will you pick? The positive side, or the darker one? Be your own person!This story does not specify any certain gender. Basically, you can either chose to go to which side you want, and then the options are yours! This is my first storygame, so I'm sorry if it's short! Feel free to comment ideas, or any criticism that you have. I'm working on a much longer and more in depth story at the moment, but this story was just to see how this website works! Enjoy!

Thank you! Sorry if it's short!

Player Comments

It should not be rated "for all ages." I liked your "brain leaving school to another planet" foundation, but then what happened? :(

— Anactaka on 5/24/2018 8:01:26 PM with a score of 0

it was really short and a bit random but it was still pretty good :) maybe lengthen it and add some more info about the two sides???

— AstralEmbers17 on 5/23/2018 4:37:19 PM with a score of 0

Fun story. The choices were pretty random, but the writing was so good and inventive that I didn't mind and ended up trying every option. Would definitely benefit from being longer and being fleshed out into a complete world (i.e. the two sides seemed too disconnected... *spoiler* how come we don't get to fight the blonde leader of the light side when we come at them from the dark side?)

— lkiriakos on 5/23/2018 12:59:11 PM with a score of 0

The writing itself is decent so I'm sure if the author puts in the effort to make a longer story it'll do fine, but this one suffered from the (lack of) length and had a lot of silly randomness going on, and just in general felt pretty rushed.

'Wait, that's not my gun!' did get a chuckle out of me however.

— Mizal on 5/23/2018 12:40:37 PM with a score of 0

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