You Choose (Part I)

It is useless to separate a game with the length of 1/8 into parts. I feel like this needs a lot more effort put into it, and there was barely any descriptive writing. The spelling and grammar was okay. You don't need to put *your name*, the reader doesn't really care what name they have.

1/8 for me

short :( and give the players more leeway on what they can do and how to change the story.

The Only choice was to open a fricken window?
Make it longer dammit!

What just happened?

Worser than Trump.

What the fuck was that?

I'm going to take a wild guess and say English isn't your first language. At least I hope not, considering you used the phrase, "You should decrease your imagination."

That was fairly dire.
I particularly liked the line "Mm.. I'm your mate "caller's name" who turns out to be my crush. I'll list the mistakes wrong with this six word sentence.
1) No one starts a conversation with Mm unless they are a robot.
2) Girls rarely refer to themselves as "your mate" (I'm assuming it's a girl because you didn't identify the gender).
3) People rarely tell you that they are your mates. They tend to assume you know that your both friends already.
4) If you are too lazy to think up a name for the person calling you then you have a long way to go.
5) There is no reason for "caller's name" to be in quotation marks.
6) As crush is a verb not an adjective we use it to say "I have a crush on..." rather than "... is my crush".
You lack a story, characters and plot, this is just a bunch of random stuff. I appreciate your probably very young but before writing it's important to know what you are going to write about. Otherwise it's just a bunch of random unfinished stuff like this.

This is not a story! There is no choice in this except as to whether I want to let a bird into my room! Please make this longer! PLEASE!

No! No no no no no! This was not a story. I literally just woke up and got a phone call. That is not enough to be a complete story, let alone a part 1. Also if it is called " You chose" then why do I not have any choices that affect anything? 1/8 from me. Burn this before it burns my retinas permanently.