Player Comments on Don't blink

There's not much meat here. I was interested to see where the eyeless/blinking premise was headed, but unfortunately the story explains nothing. It seems to be five rooms where you pick up items and then the story ends. Your English is not too bad. There are a couple errors in using the items - taking one to the wrong page after using the drops (use Previous page rather than a specific page on that item page). Try expanding the background and the rooms a bit more and you could have something.

It was good. Not very good, but it was a work which you could be proud of. I found a bug, in which if you use the eye drops in the room with a bunch of doors, you get sent into the trap room.
But it wasn't bad, and the total idea was okay, though short. I gave it a 4/8

It was good. I liked the story, though I wish there was more of it. Use of items was good. I do wish more had been explained about the creatures, why you are a subject, ect. Otherwise, good story :D

I did think this game was an interesting concept. The whole not being able to close your eyes, not even to blink, was a really interesting one...and I liked the whole idea of having the eye 'health' (I guess?) as a number. I ran into a few endings, but the one I finally stopped reading at was when I neglected to pay attention to the eye health and got the eye death ending.

I would have liked a bit more detail in the rooms and about the player character. While there was a file in the office that gave the character's name, there really wasn't enough information to build on what I was learning while reading the storygame.

The storygame kind of gave me space horror vibes, making me think of games such as Bioshock. I think there could have been a bit more in the way of clues about how to 'beat' the creatures. The first one I encountered, freezing in place worked...but in my second encounter, freezing in place got me killed, and it was only by running that I was able to survive.

On the whole, I felt that this storygame was a really interesting concept. I would have liked it to be more detailed, and I would recommend having a proofreader to make sure the writing makes sense...but I did enjoy it for what it was, and it was still readable. Thank you for sharing!

It's a very good game, but a little scary..

very terrifying for me, well done! i enjoyed it very much. The title reminds me of Doctor Who.

Nothin but really good

Sorry, only a 3. Too brief. Needs to be fleshed out way more.

Very interesting concept here. There were a few bugs with the eyedrops (use them more than once and they'll take you back to the room with the gas, thus burning your eyes further and making it a futile effort) and there is a distinct lack of substance here, but it does open up a lot of possibilities.

I also thought this was going to be about the weeping angels from Doctor Who. Hell, I'm glad it wasn't. This was better.

It was interesting. Some minor bugs. The ending didn't make too much sense, so maybe more backstory would have helped.

Hmmm, not bad, I like it! *Thumbs up*

Fun............

Awesome

First thing I thought was this is gonna be like weeping angels in doctor who and completely fangirled... then...

not bad

great but make longer!!!

I blinked.

The urge to blink was too great.

It had an interesting and unique concept. I liked it.

Short & Sweet
Good mechanics
Overall it was satisfying

A good game but I had got it where sometimes I would die for absolutely no reason when I went out of something.

It was OK but it was titled "Don't blink." You'd figure it would be about weeping angels but other than that it was a good story and plot...

A little reminiscent of SCP: Containment Breach, but overall fun.

Really liked this story. Short but sweet, a nice little horror that is fun to play. Nice work, 5/8

I mean it have a blinking mechanic thanks for putting scp mechanic 8/10 :)

Interesting concept, slightly reminds me of those Weeping Angels from the Doctor who series... Slightly, not sure why.

Perhaps a sequel is in order?

There was no explanation at all about who I am, why I am stuck in the laboratory, or why the city is destroyed. This makes for an unfinished story, and a sequel would actually be quite nice. 5/8, higher if story is finished.

Good!

It was a fun distraction that took a few minutes to complete, more background or explanation in an extended version would be good.

BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH.

Best comment ever.

I tried to play through the whole game without blinking... Didn't work :p

Not bad, good use of items and language

I actually quite enjoyed this game. The story could use a bit more detail, and there were a couple of gameplay bugs, but overall it was a good first game.
6/8

Not very good.

That was undoubtly nice.

There are a few misspelled words and multiple grammar mistakes. I would recommend getting someone to test and edit your game before you publish. Also your title should be capitalized as 'Don't Blink'.

The concept of the game itself if very unique and can definitely be improved upon. However you should probably put the next part--assuming there is going to be a second part--in with this one to make it one storygame since this one is much too short to be split into parts. Also you may want to use a little more detail when you're writing for I couldn't quite tell what was going on for some parts of the story.

The last part I wanted to comment on is that when you are speaking of the five doors, you don't have to list them out (1, 2, 3...). You can instead describe all of them in a paragraph and the links can say 'Red door' or 'Door to office' etc.

I enjoyed it

I wasn't a fan of the plot.

It will be explained in Decay ^^.

Need a vital improvement by putting more effort. In my view, you should first read the articles related to storygames that you can find in Help and Info section.

THIS IS FANTASTIC!! i hope there would be a sequel

Also there's way too many eye drops, I never had to use them.

Really good for your first game, I would love a sequel.

There's a bug where whenever you use eye drops you end up in the gas room.

Thank you all! I want to say one thing. No there won't be a sequel... but there may be a prequel.

Good !

Thank you! ^^
About Creepyness... it's a horror game.

I really liked it! It was pretty creepy although I sometimes had problems with the items (especially the teardrops).

Nice game :P Create a sequel :D