Player Comments on First Dates Can Be Tricky

I actually really enjoyed this storygame, and it held a lot more than expected from the story length. I think that with some more story behind this, it could certainly be one of the better storygames that can be found here.
Very little errors can be found in grammar and spelling, which shows the fort the author put into their storygame.

I really like how the author provided such a fulfilling story with only a small amount of words, which is very impressive to me. On one of that paths, it reveals that there's a whole other story, so that could also be provided to increase the length.

Another thing I enjoyed was how there's different paths available, so it's not linear like some stories that are twice as long but not even as good. Hopefully in the future the author can either add to this or create a whole new storygame altogether, which I would not hesitate to read.

5/8

HAHAHAHA ITS SO FUNNY I LOVED WHEN YOU CHOSE A BJ SHE COMPLETELY LEFT HIM!!! I PLAYED THIS GAME SO MANY TIMES AND BASICALLY DID ALL THE DIFFERENT BRANCHES!! I LOVE IT AND I WANT A PART TWO SO BADDDDD!!!!

Insanely good 10/10

Pretty good even though its kinda short

pretty good.

ok

Oh my god…. Well it was funny,….

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The writing style was old-fashioned, but descriptive.

lovely game enjoied playing, would love a second one

There were lots of endings which I really enjoyed!

I literally died insaide when i made the wrong choice, so u did gud

Good but short

A must read primer for those seeking to survive in today's dog eat dog and blame the cat world, for it is a work adroitly aware of the fundamental flaws of Westerners named along the lines of Jyoti. Nothing good comes of such upper middle class, white women with special nomenclature, their petite innocence a mere mask for the blackest of souls that would spurn xenia for but a moment's satisfaction. The lack of continuity in the work only furthers the point, driving home the duplicitous nature of the documented.

very short and not very fun

it was too short

short

My 2nd time in a row the game is amazing

An entertaining read. The first ending I got is where she just nicks your phone and you have to chase her out the house. Whereas if you choose slightly differently, she never nicks your phone at all.

There's really not much continuity here. If you ask her to do one option, then your sister turns up. If you ask her another option, your sister never even makes an appearance. All that aside, it was still fun to read.

it was ok, a little short though

Now THAT'S romantic...

*cries in corner in acknowledgment such idealistic a date will not be possible in user's life* Anyway, you've got an uncommon story type here. You wrote this in third-person view, but managed to maintain the excellency of the story. It's also one of the not many short stories I've left a good rating on. Still, the length was a bit of a bother, but your apparent mastery of details and wording, and the flowiness of an ideal story in its telling, more than make up for the short length.

Good things really do sometimes come in small packages, and almost all the time they're worth all the cents users have to offer. 6/8.

Too short, boring.

Noice.

Needs to be a bit longer

hahaha so cute :3

cute

it was really enjoyable to read. My favorite one so far

Fun

I came expecting a serious romance story. I left laughing my ass off. Job well done author.

okayyyy

A short and sweet storygame, but I was kind of disappointed. when I looked at the description I was thinking of a- well, I don't know, a crazy robber rapist would bust in or aliens attacked and Mike would have to save Jyoti. But it was still an alright story. I like the its gonna cost you a blowjob option. :)

what was that?

woop woop not yet rated I rated Not the best not the worst

I really enjoyed this I tried a few different choices and some were funny while others were sweet. Props on the perfect blend.

It could've been a great story... 3/8

Ha, I just played it again, haha! I don't know, but I thought that If I picked the Blowjob option, I would come up with some sort of fight that would end up with Michael in jail or something. But yah.

Not bad! You really made it ovious what the choices were. I probably am going to play again to see what happens if I play the wrong choices. But cool, nice game!

:OOOOOOOOO I think this story game needs a bit more improvement. What perspective is this in? I got confused when Michael punched the girl in the nose???? Like, it totally didn't make sense. It was on the cusp of being good until it drops you into its clutches am leaves your girl to due or bleed out......T^T

Kinda cute. I DIDN'T CHOOSE THE YOU-KNOW-WHAT. But, I did choose Bach at first and SHE TOOK 'MA PHONE

ATTACK. I thought it meant "sexual assault" but apparently he just tickled her? Was that some sort of metaphor? XD

I immediately clicked "A blowjob". Because I'm a perv. Because I was wondering how far you'd go...

Well written story. A good read

IT WAS ADORABLE! d'aaw *dies of cuteness*

Oh god, I loved it so much. I was laughing along with the female character, with the blow job thing. I picked it because I was bored and I just wanted to see where it would go.

eh

Darn it! I knew I shouldn't of asked for a blow job!

It was written fairly well and it actually left me wanting more! It is a short story, but it was never intended to be anything more from what I gathered.

Great work.

Easy!

It's actually alright.I like it ;D

really nice game. It was tricky!

Wow, 90% of the story is g-rated, then you randomly get an r-rated page..

I should give you a 5 for it being short. plus it is either too easy or I am just good with girls. i really hope it is the latter. But since I find shy girls to be very cute i will give you a six. Job well done.

Kinda fun. Ended to quick for me though...but a funny ending!

Nice and fun, you could lower the maturity rating though.

Good writing, maturity level should be 3

It was cute. There's a bit that doesn't make sense where you can look in the hallway or the closet and the girl is in two different places, plus depending on what choices you make the girl's personality changed dramatically, but I still liked it. Personally, I'd be putty in the guy's hand after the Disney songs :p