Player Comments on Life as a cat named Fluffles

This was ver short

This was good, but, it could have had a bit more detail or have been longer.

Crap.

Being Fluffles has brought has brought me enlightenment in the arts of catistry. That is all.

Good writing and plot, but it's short.
I love the name!

That was retarded! I mean, seriously?! Fluffles???????? Short and stupid :((((((((

I think it was ok could improve but ok! it needs something exiting though....

This is a really boring game. Poop on it if your smart.

I Liked The Idea, If Worked On Would Make A Great Game!

There was nothing exciting that ever went on. 2/8. I would've given you at least a rank of 4 if it was more descriptive and well-written. But if you keep trying at it, you may succeed.

Nothing exciting really happens.

Short, boring nothing exciting happens.

What?

This was supposed to be the LIFE of a cat, not a DAY in the LIFE.
Really short, really dull, didn't like it. 2/8.

NOTHING HAPPENED

it was kinda boring..... not exiting... in the end you had to go outside you had to choose everything but that and it came to a way of saying. "NOPE!" hehehehe is the game said! D:

It was so good that I could poop on it.
2/8

It was so good that I could poop on it.
2/8

I hate this store, so much.

This is everything wrong with CYS. This and Medicine Bunny.

Boring.

Well.... I've seen so many story games in the lives of animals, and a lot of them are the same. Maybe you should try writing about a different topic or do something with this topic that is completely different then the others. Because to be honest, a day in the life of an animal isn't very exciting, but an animal on a mission to save its kidnapped owner would be a lot more so.. I hope I helped and keep on writing:)

It was *very* boring.You could of at least put some excitment into it! It was well written, though.

Pretty dull.

As far as I know there have never been any books published about what it's like living the life of a cat and that may be because cats have pretty boring lives, though I suppose it's probably worse being a goldfish.
There is no plot and no characters here but what is there is a fairly well structured and well written story game, I like the way you logically put everything together (for example the title doesn't leave much doubt as to the content of the story game), I think if you wrote a full length and well plotted story game it would be quite good :) This one was just so so.

It was an okay first effort, but it was still very bad.
2/8

Boring and unoriginal.

Great story, but needs more words, links, and the options should lead to new options.

It was short sure, and not many options because most led back to the same thing...at the end it said "You didn't do many exciting things today but you will tomorrow" so why not make a longer version of tomorrow? I wouldn't rate this story bad, for sure...but try to make it a little longer with more links and options that lead to more options. Otherwise, great job! :)

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Ummmm...Too short?

You should add more to this story, like, dialog, more words on one page, more links, and that kinda stuff

3/8. Update this!