Player Comments on life+of+a+wizard

Hey harrypotter12345678,
if you're really as young as you say you are, then you should probably give it a few more years before posting stories to the site. Or at the very least, read the articles and understand the minimum guidelines. This site is just as much for readers as writers, so in order for a story to stay up, it needs to meet some minimum standards. Which yours doesn't. We're not trying to be mean, this is only meant to be helpful. Next time, just practice writing a bit more before publishing your story.

Shouldn't you be watching Cocomelon or something?

i am only 8

Wow. This still really sucks.

1/8
I don't think I need to explain

Note to the author: this was unpublished as an admin action for not meeting minimum site standards, please leave it that way.

I'm sure you'll do better next time. It would be difficult not to.

This is pointless and obviously just an initial outline to test the engine and general building. Feel free to unpublish this and give it more than a sentence a page. You've got a really deep hole of negative reviews to dig out from, but it's not impossible if you really put in some effort.

Remember that writing stories is not a race. It's been over a month and I'm still writing Betarune.

This story is clearly rushed and would benefit from more detail & better choices. For example, randomize the selection for the hat sorting (See the 'How to use Random Variables' Article in the Help & Info tab), or use habits that determine whether or not you ace the final exams or not.

Overall, come back and publish when you get more effort done into this and maybe it'll be a great story.

It is such a bad game. Also, haven't you noticed that most of the good ratings have been made by someone with harrypotter in their name? Seems like the makers of the lame so-called game are despreate for players haha. Anyways, it is just lame yes or no questions like: Ace your test or not ace your test. DO NOT PLAY THIS SO-CALLED GAME. IT 100% WASTES YOUR TIME.

It's no Mercer Gang

I'm really sorry, but this was genuinely bad. I really recommend reading the articles in the sidebar before making a game, because there's nothing I can really say. This game will be unpublished on account of its lack of effort and obvious plagiarism.

...I'm going to be charitable and assume you hit the publish button by mistake.

best game ever

the best game ever!!!!!