Player Comments on Mutiny On Board the Bounty

I'm quite glad I stumbled across this as I was thinking of writing a similar story about the same things, though the idea of using Adams as a narrator was a clever one. There should have been a few more choices; the troubles on the Bounty began with Bligh's decision to sail around Cape Horn instead of the Cape of Good Hope and his subsequent promotion of Fletcher at John Fryer's expense so that might have been a good place to start picking sides. The writing was consistently strong throughout, though at times it did feel more like witnessing than taking part in history, a few little extra details and less use of specific dates goes a long way towards making history feel like a living experience. I enjoyed this a lot though and with such a good story-game about the Mutiny on the Bounty out there it would be pointless of me to write another.

Love it. Felt like I was on the ship

I enjoyed this. I did cheat on some of the decisions, but I think that was the right idea - it's good to envision a life of island bliss. I would recommend playing this.

Nicely paced story. I like the brief but effective descriptions...best are the waters and the islands and the plants. Interesting way to learn history.

A very interesting historical game. With two sides of the story!

Not many choices, but this is a great story for edutainment.

Fun! Spelling issues are abundant, as well as a couple of typos. Good read.

Amazing story game, I liked the multiple good endings, so you didn't have to follow a single path. You should make more like this

Enjoyed it. One of the mutineers, Matthew Quintal, is my 2nd cousin 5 times removed.

Pretty lengthy and well written. A lot more of a story than a CYOA but it's worth a read.

Really good. Wish it was longer, though, and had more choices.

Alright, bit boring from time to time.

Very nice writing. Your grammar was perfect, which I really appreciate, and you had only a couple spelling errors. The flow was great, and the story was intriguing. The only bad thing was the insane number of choiceless pages, which really made it less exciting. Otherwise, I loved it.

not bad

Needed to be long

Wanted it to be longer

This story has great writing style and flow.

I like the historical reference, and it is very well written accept for the frequent spelling mistakes. Run it through a spell checker and revise a few of the pages and I think it could be near the caliber of the veteran writers. I think we'll see some truely great stories from you after some experience.

Pros: Plenty of descriptive action, good length, choices impact storyline in a meaningful manner.

Cons: Takes a while to get to first choice, several glaring and repeated spelling errors.

Overall: A very nice addition to the site.

Very Well Done :)
The only complaint was at the beginning with the momentum-killing series of choiceless pages.

dang, attacted by cannibals. lol great writing, great story line. i never read the original. this makes me want to. great contribution to the site.

This kicks ass. A GOOD adventure game. Teeheehee I have 9 women to myself...

Man, I rock...